A Case of Mistaken Identity | By : RatedE4U Category: Twilight Series > Het F > Bella/Jacob Views: 5368 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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A Case of Mistaken Identity
By JacobsKryptonite
A/N: This is my first fan fic on AFF.net so all I ask of you is that you please be kind when you are reviewing my story when I review stories on my other accounts I am respectful so I ask the same of you and yes I know that my punctuation and perhaps my grammar will be sloppy so again please be kind. I do accept criticism but not when it makes me feel like my story and ideas are crap. My story might seem weird at first but bear with me ok? Ok thank you and enjoy ^.^
Chapter One: SAY WHAT?!?!
It started out as just another beautiful day the sun was shining, the birds were singing and everyone seemed to have gotten bitten by the love bug well that’s spring fever for you I guess. Bella was excited tonight she would get to see Edward and she hadn’t seen him in what felt like months even though his “hunting” trips were only four days long. But tonight felt different then again she knew it would be different especially when Edward promised on the phone that he would finally give it a shot and make love to her she was so stoked that she even went to a lingerie store and bought herself a transparent night gown now I know what you’re thinking ‘Bella would never be so bold as to buy sexy lingerie’ but put yourself in her position if you were going to make love to the man you love with all your heart wouldn’t you want to do something special for him?
Finally it was nighttime and as she was putting on her night gown she was thanking every god she could think of that Charlie was not home and had gone on one of his fishing trips. As she was scrambling around to get everything ready she failed to notice that she had a missed phone call from an Edward Cullen but in her haste it went unnoticed. It was only eight o’clock so she decided to rest up a bit after all she needed all the strength she could get and she knew Edward wouldn’t come over until about eleven so she had plenty of time.
Bella had just turned out the last of her lights and was laying down to rest for Edward when she heard a slight tapping noise on her window she looked to see who it was and it was none other than her knight in shining armor himself. Edward had come sooner than she had anticipated but who was she to care after all tonight she would finally be Edwards. She got up to open the window and blushed after she realized she was in her see through night gown, but Edward really didn’t mind as she heard a predator like growl of approval….wait growl? She was about to question when two lips came crashing down onto hers, making her forget her question as she moaned into his mouth and he seeing this as his chance to deepen the kiss slid his tongue into her hot waiting mouth he let out a moan of his own when he felt her tongue slide along his.
Bella’s hands began to wander to his hair as she tangled her fingers in his long silky locks but she was too caught in the moment to care as she felt a hand go up her night gown to cup her braless breast and start rolling her nipple between his fingers she broke from the kiss and let out a gasping moan and pushed herself into his hips suddenly feeling his very large member push back. She blushed and felt herself get wet at the thought and shivered as she felt his other hand start to move south, she started to protest until she felt his mouth on her other neglected breast and she felt another delicious wave of heat pool in her nether region and felt him grind into her adding more fuel to the fire, as her legs turned to jelly. Before she could blink she found herself in two very strong arms that started carrying her toward her bed and placing her on the soft comforter. He wasted no time and started where he had carried off and she now felt his fingers playing with the elastic of her thong and his mouth now on her throat sucking on her pulse she let out a whimper, she felt she would go crazy if he didn’t touch her where she needed to be touched the most and almost as if he read her thoughts she felt his fingers enter her thong and start stroking her.
He let out a very audible gasp as he discovered that she was sopping wet and ready for him to take her at any time but he knew he had to prepare her more for the onslaught that was to come and slowly inserted a finger into her awaiting heat while his thumb started rubbing her clit. Bella was now writhing and making mewling noises as he continued his sweet torture on her pussy bringing her closer and closer to her end and just as she thought it couldn’t get any better she felt his fingers touch a hidden spot deep within her causing her to buck her hips and let out a cry as she experienced her first orgasm of the night. She was suddenly very aware that his mouth had joined his fingers and was now lapping up the sweet nectar that was escaping her she groaned when she felt another orgasm staring to build within her as his tongue fully replaced his fingers and was now licking her and sucking her bringing her closer to her second release and with one last flick of his tongue to her clit her second release was brought on and she screamed Edwards name. She looked up as she felt him stiffen what had she done? Maybe she pushed him too far and he was afraid to lose control?
She was about to question when Edward suddenly turned into some kind of enraged animal as he started growling and ripping her night gown off and tossing it across the room along with his shirt and pants as he lowered himself on top of her, pinning her hands above her head and was positioning his erection at her entrance and was pushing forward she started to panic Edward wasn’t like this! He was the exact OPPOSITE of this! She was going to scream tell him to stop when he muffled her screams with his mouth as he made the final plunge into her breaking her innocence. Tears started to fall down her cheeks at the pain that shot through her, she looked into the eyes of the man who had promised never to hurt her and saw they were black and held anger and betrayal and lust but there was something else she saw regret and sadness she too suddenly felt sad she lost herself and egged him on to the point where he lost control.
She lifted her hands to his face and brought it back down to her so that she could give his lips an apologetic kiss he seemed to understand and kissed her back. She had long forgotten about the pain of his entry and now gave an experimental push upward she moaned at the same time he did both feeling the exact same pleasure shock that coursed through their bodies. He pulled out and she whimpered at the loss but he surprised her by shoving back in slowly he repeated this process slow and steady until he felt something in his mind tell him that this position wasn’t meant for him and that this speed wasn’t right either. So letting his instinct take over as he grabbed Bella and flipped her over onto her hands and knees and pushed himself back in. Bella gasped at this new position but gladly welcomed it as this position seemed to let him hit something deep within her a spot where only his fingers once had the pleasure of touching she shivered at the memory and felt herself tighten with anticipation.
Edward let out a groan behind her and started to thrust forward like a mad man. Bella’s moans turned into screams as she experienced orgasm after orgasm from his rough treatment she never was one for pain but as his nails caused her hips to bleed and the red mark his hand print was leaving behind on her ass was making her really rethink that. Finally just when she thought she would faint she finally felt a rush of warmth from him and blushed brightly as he yelled her name which sounded to her like a howl but as she was finally relaxing Edward bit her shoulder and seemed to attach himself to her for a minute all that sex and now him biting her had now all taken its toll as she fell onto her stomach, closed her eyes and started to fall into a blissful sleep as she heard Edward say “I love you Bella and I always will” Bella’s last thought as she was drifting off was ‘ why does Edward suddenly sound like Jacob?’
Bella jumped awake as she felt the cool Forks air come into her window and touch her naked body she had the most amazing time with Edward last night and couldn’t wait to see him. But she couldn’t stay in bed all day thinking about it because she had to get ready for school so she could go and meet Edward and then maybe talk about a repeat performance but first she needed a shower she was all sticky and sweaty she blushed at the memory but shrugged it off and tried to not think about Edward and her having sex. Just as Bella finished getting ready and was running down the stairs she heard her dad shuffling about downstairs putting his fishing gear away.
“Hey Bells, did u have a good weekend?”
“Same old same old dad, finishing up school work”
“Oh and trying to think of what college to get into.”
“Atta girl, school first boys later”
“Boys? I didn’t say anything about boys”
“Oh. Right well have a good day at school”
“Will do dad”
She waved as she walked out the door and to her truck hoping that the day would be done already and she would be in Edwards’s arms. As the truck pulled up Edward was already waiting there for Bella he had an apologetic look on his face.
“Hey Edward!”
“Bella…..” Edward's voice didn't carry it's normal happy tune
“Wha..”
“Look Bella before you say anything I just want to say I’m sorry I wasn’t at your house last night but I can explain”
“Whoa! Whoa!! Whoa!!! Slow down!! You weren’t at my house last night?!?!?!”
“No Bells I left a message didn’t you get it? I said that I needed one more day of feeding before I come back to you and try to do anything sexual”
“Oh my god!”
“What is it Bells?”
“If you were gone then, who was?”
“What?”
“Oh never mind Edward everything is perfectly fine” she said trying to put on her best smile.
“Oh ok then well see you in class.”
“Yep see you in class” the bell rang and Edward took off for class while Bella was still at her truck stunned ‘if that wasn’t Edward who was it?’
DUN DUN DUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A/N: Well there you have I the first chapter to my first fic EVER!!!!!! I really didn’t know how to start the lemon I mean my experiences with sex are nothing like what I read on AFF.net well I mean the foreplay and about a million orgasm things so I really don’t have any clue where to start lol I mean I’m 20 years old (well will be April 3rd yay me) and it seriously took me an hour to write a lemon god Im pathetic oh well now that I’ve don’t it I’m sure that they will become more and more easy to write well ttyl for now ^.^ and I hope you enjoyed it so far so plz review.
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