Black Heart

**Okay i totally did this chapter over!!! Why? B/c it didn't seem that a lot of people really liked the way it played out...some thought it was a bit sappy b/c of the way hook acted. I kinda agree with that so i rewrote this chapter...hope you guys don't mind, but i really want this to be a great story and I want my readers to enjoy it to the fullest so i'm correcting my mistakes! Love ya all!



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Elanor looked over the side of the deck as she spotted James sword fighting with five of his men. Elanor was delighted and curious as she watched James beat his men down again and again. She sighed as she watched the sweat drip down his bare chest. She felt breathless as she admired the way he showed his agility and technique as he evaded the daggers and rapiers aiming for his heart. Elanor quickly fled off the ship and onto the beach where all the men were practicing their sword fighting. All the men were resting lazily on the beach by the time she got there. She spotted James by the water as he poured some of the liquid onto his face to cool down.
Elanor smiled as she prepared to come up behind him and push him into the waves, but as she reached out he quickly spun around and grabbed her wrist. She gasped out in surprise as James pulled her against his chest and looked down at her mischeivously. "You weren't going to push me in, were you Elanor?" Elanor couldn't stop the nervous giggle that escaped her body and replied cheekily, "Really James, don't be so paranoid...why would I do such a thing?" Hook raised an eyebrow in a way that implied that he thought she was lying. Elanor wanted him to stop looking at her so suspiciously so she leaned up and kissed him tenderly on his lips. She timidly stroked her tongue against his own and she moaned as he pulled her tightly against his body. She rubbed her hands across his chest and she was about to lower them toward the hem of his pants, but Hook abruptly pulled back.
His eyes felt like they were scorching her body as he stared at her. Embarassed, Elanor looked down to cover the blush on her cheeks, but Hook took her chin in his hand and made her look at him. "You make me lose control to easily." Elanor opened her mouth to speak, but Hook already covered her mouth with his own. Elanor couldn't think as her body readily responded to the feelings he evoked within her. Each gasp and moan was driving Hook made and he found himself wanting her. All of her.
Hook pulled away and again and he smirked and said, "I need to take a bath." After he spoke he pulled Elanor along with him. Elanor was still befuddled from his kisses and she followed him down a path she didn't recognize. He seemed to be in a hurry and Elanor had to jog to keep up with his pace. Finally they reached a small lagoon with a waterfall. Elanor didn't have time to take in her surrouding because she was busy watching Hook undress himself.
His body was lean, but he had a muscular built. His scars made him look rough and his shaft stood out proudly in front of him. Elanor finally looked up at his face and she felt her legs grow weak when she saw the lust burning in his eyes. His voice was harsh when he spoke. "Take off your clothes Elanor."
Elanor slowly undid the lace of her dress and she slowly let the material slide down her body. She was only left in her chemise. She lifted up her hand and unbraided her hair and let it fall in soft waves across her shoulder. She felt warm as she saw Jame's eyes roam over her body as he stared longingly at her figure. Then she pulled the chemise over her head and she felt the cool air over her skin. She felt so different standing in front of Hook. She was naked in front of him before, but it was as if this were the first time she exposed herself to him. The tension in the air was thick and the two figures continued to stare at one another.
Hook turned around and he began to go in the water. He looked over his shoulder and looked at Elanor's face and told her to follow him. He swam toward a big rock in the middle of the lagoon. He turned around and rested his back against it and watched his angel slowly make her way toward him. Her beautiful skin glistened with water and her hair framed her lovely face. He felt a little dizzy, a little more out of control, and he felt the violent storm erupting in his body. Of course, Elanor didn't know the struggle he was going through. He wanted to slam himself into her body again and again, but he wanted to take it slow and not frighten her.
When Elanor reached his side she wrapped her arms around him and held him close. She felt his body tense, but he wrapped his arms around her and squeezed her against him. Elanor looked up at him and inquired, "Are you going to take your bath now?" Hook leaned down until he was a breathe away from her and said, "later" right before he kissed her. His tongue was gentle at first, but the passion began to flare inside of him and he held nothing back. He began to rub his hand down her back and he pulled her up against his hardness. He wanted to overwhelm her with his touch so she wouldn't be scared and when he heard her gasp of pleasure he knew he was succeding. Hook began to kiss Elanor down her throat and his hand slid down to her womanhood. He slowly began to stroke her and he grinned when he felt Elanor's head fall back in sndernder as the emotions took over.
Elanor moved her hips against his exploring hand and she slowly lowered her own hand onto his shaft. She stroked him tenderly at first, but then she grasped him fully and began to stroke him. Then she screamed out when James started to finger her more agressively. Elanor felt like she was about to explode and she began to chant her lover's name over and over. He pulled his hand away and Elanor looked at him with anger for stopping but he gave her a hard kiss to silence her protest. Hook pulled Elanor around until she was facing the rock and she put her hands out to hold herself up. She felt James breathe on her shoulder and he pulled himself up behind her. He began to kiss her again and he slowly pushed himself up inside of her womanhood. Elanor's eyes opened in shock...she was scared, but excited with the thought that he was going to deflower her. Tears welled up in her eyes as she cried out. Then James began to soothe her with sweet words. He told her how beautiful she was and he begged her not to cry out. Elanor bit her lip to stop herself from screaming out. Hook leaned down and whispered, "I'm sorry, but I can't wait any longer." He pulled back and rammed himself past her maidenhood and filled her with his manhood. Elanor let out a soft cry and she gripped the rock with all her might. Both of them were breathing hard and Hook tightened his hold around Elanor's hip to keep her steady.
All the emotions he held inside erupted and all the passion he held back for all these months began to take over his senses. Knowing he was going to hurt her he pulled back and repeatedly began to shove himself deep within her wet opening. He pulled her hips tight against his own as he let her body squeeze him powerfully. He felt her vaginal muscles contract around his swollen member and he groaned out in pleasure as she tightened her hold of him insider her. He began to rub one of her breast as he squeezed and groped it in his large hand.
Elanor was in pain at first, but Jame's rough demeanor started to make her arouseShe She moaned as he relentlessly made love to her. His hand was rubbing her breast, but then it went lower until he was stroking her clit lovingly. Elanor's hips began to buck underneath his as passion began to take over her body. Her nails scratched the rock wildly as the pleasure coursed throughout her body. She felt Jame's hardness fill her deeply with each stroke as he continued to make the pleasure within her grow. She flet her climax was close approaching and she began to scream out how much she loved him and he in turn began to fuck her harder than ever before. His muscular arms crushed her small body to his own and he grew excited as he felt her climax wash over his manhood. He felt his angel tense and she let out a cry full of happiness and then her body grew limp. She pressed the side of her face against the rock and she continued to gasp as Hook continued to pump himself inside of her. He knew he was coming so he turned Elanor around to face him and reentered her from the front. He stared deep into her eyes and became mesmerized by the love he saw in them. Then he let out a harsh growl and shot his seed deep into her unprotected womb. His continued to shot his seed in her for five more minutes. Her muscles were squeezing every last drop from him and when he was finished he collapsed against her. No words were exchanged between them...they closed their eyes and were content with the feel of eachother's heartbeat against their chest. They exchanged sweet kisses and Elanor leaned up and whispered, "I love you."
Hook acknowledged her pledge by giving her more kisses as he slowly brought her back to where their clothes lay. He slowly dressed her up and when they were both dressed hde hde her sit against him as he held her. "Did I hurt you Elanor?" Elanor began to cry as she said, "Yes, but it felt better afterwards." Then Elanor looked up into his eyes and said, "Thank you so much...this experience was beautiful." Hook smirked arrogantly and kissed her until they both became breathless. He stroked her face and pulled the wet strands away from her face. Elanor became teary eyed again. She wanted him to tell her he loved her so badly, but she was content for the moment because she knew that in his heart that he must love her. Even now he was treating her so tenderly and she knew he must care for her. Smiling she leaned against him and hugged him tightly, never wanting to let him go.