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The Journey	By : beautifullysevere Category: A through F > Divergent (series) > Divergent (series) Views: 2286 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: Based on the world of Divergent, which I do NOT own. Anything familiar is clearly not mine. The rest is mine though, so please don't use it without my knowledge. Thank you. Also, no money/profit is made from this story.

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Eric sat for a bit trying desperately to figure out what had just happened. He was at a loss. For once in his life, he had no idea what was going on. Things had been going well, beyond well. They fit together, moved together, perfectly. Nothing had ever felt so right to him. Didn't she feel it too? What the hell happened? Maybe...no, he didn't want to think it. Didn't want to entertain the thought that while she definitely wanted Eric, maybe she wanted Niru more. She had never denied her involvement with him, she just said that they hadn't been together physically tonight. Eric was starting to see red.
He decided that they needed to talk about this, and it needed to happen right now. He swung open her door intent on asking her just what the hell game was she playing, but his words caught in his throat. She was sitting on the floor in the far corner of her room. Her knees pulled to her chest, her arms wrapped around them, and her head laying on her knees. She looked so small. He had never seen her look so....weak, so broken. He couldn't yell at her, couldn't be mad, but he was still hurt.
He walked over to her and without saying a word picked her up and carried her into his room. He sat on his bed with her on his lap, gently rubbing her back.
"It's ok Freya. It will be ok." He said, trying to calm her.
"No...no it's not...I can't...I'm..."
"I know. I get it. You're in love with Niru."
Freya instantly sat up and looked into his face, thoroughly confused, but before she could say anything though he continued.
"I know that you want me Freya, I have no doubt in that. While I'm not exactly happy about it, I at least understand that it's going to take you a bit to forget what you and Niru had."
She couldn't help it. She let out a small laugh. Eric glared at her. He was trying to be kind and understanding, two things he most certainly was not, and here she was laughing at him.
"What the hell is so funny?" He asked, his anger seeping into his voice.
"You think I love Niru."
"Well don't you...isn't that why you can't be physical with me?"
"No. I don't love Niru, well not like that. He's my mentor, like an Uncle to me. We've never been together like you are thinking Eric."
"Well, then what the hell Freya, what's wrong?"
"I....well....ugh!"
"Spit it out, Princess." He said, his patience growing very thin.
"Eric...I've never...."
"You? No. You're not....you couldn't be. I mean I thought for a second maybe...but look at you."
She blushed. "I may be attractive Eric but that doesn't mean much. I've never been interested in anyone before you. I've never wanted anyone before you. And I'll be damned if I was going to settle just to have some physical contentment."
"So, you're a virgin. Good."
"Good? How is that good? I have no clue what I'm doing here Eric. I can't please you like you deserve."
"Is that why you say you can't?"
"Eric....I'm scared." That was far harder to say than it should have been, but she was Dauntless after all. Dauntless were supposed to be fearless. Brave. And here she sat, a coward.
"Oh, my beautiful Freya. This is the unknown, and the unknown is unsettling to even the most Dauntless of us. Don't worry though, I will protect you. You know, we don't have to do this now. We can wait until you're ready. As much as it kills me to say that, and as much as my body is protesting my stupid heart, I will gladly wait for you Freya." He turned her in his lap so she was once again straddling him, and hugged her tight to him.
She sat there in his embrace, thinking over his words. The great Eric Coulter was willing to wait for her. Willing to be celibate until she was ready to be with him. She smiled. Who would have thought? The thing was though, she didn't want to wait. She wanted so badly to be with him. To feel him on her, inside her. She was just overly nervous about it.
She placed her cheek on his, her lips nearly touching his ear. "But I don't want to wait. I want you now Eric."
He pulled back and searched her face. He found the truth in her words, but he could also see that she was still incredibly nervous. That would never do.
"Tell me what you need Freya, I want this perfect for you."
"I just, I mean I know what to do. I know the mechanics of it, probably even more than just the simple mechanics. The ladies at the monastery are very thorough in their instruction. I'm still slightly concerned that I can't please you though, while I know the theory I've never actually performed the tasks. Also, I suspect that your member is a little larger than average." She laughed.
"Hahaha! Well, that's one way to put it. Don't worry though Freya. I'll take care of you, and I'm positive that you will be able to please me. Just please Freya, please let me have you. I've waited long enough."
"Hmm, well since you asked so nicely." She smiled and he pulled her face to his. Sealing his lips against hers once again. She was lost in the feel of his lips, but then her brain pulled forth what he had said. I've waited long enough.
"Wait, what do you mean you've waited long enough. Exactly how long have you wanted me, Eric?" She asked with a grin, thoroughly curious.
"I knew I loved you when those factionless took you. I felt like my heart had been ripped out of my chest. As for wanting you....well I nearly fainted from the instant hard on you gave me when I walked into that monastery."
With this new found information Freya became a bit more confident. She began to slowly move her hips, her core gentle sliding back and forth over his growing hardness. Kissing, licking, and sucking his neck. "Mmm, that's a long time, why didn't you say anything? Why didn't you make a move? We could have been doing this ages ago." She questioned as she continued to tease his neck, running her hands over his shoulders and arms. Feeling all the muscles she had been drooling over since she met him.
"You're the Princess....fuck....of Dauntless. So far out of my league....gah that feels good...." He struggled to say as Freya continued her assault on him. As her hands reached his lower stomach, just above his pants, he couldn't take it anymore. He flipped her over, pinning her body to the mattress with his, kissing her fiercely. Continuing to kiss her he took her hands in his, slowly moving them up above her head. He then pinned him there by her wrists with one hand. He was a little surprised that not only did she not protest being held in place, but her body arched into his and she moaned deeply in response. Keeping her wrists in his hand he trailed his other down the side of her face.
"You are so perfect my Freya. Fuck, the things you do to me...the things I'm gonna do to you." She was lost in sensation yet again. She couldn't respond, not verbally anyway. All she could do was try to push her body even closer to his. She whined not being able to get what she wanted. "Did you just whine? Did you need something Princess?"
"Plllease Eric, don't stop...don't stop touching me."
Eric growled and attacked her lips again. Moving his hand from her face, down her neck. He felt her crane her neck a bit at the contact. Trying to get his hand to make more connection. Maybe she would enjoy my hand wrapped around her neck. Later. His hand continued its path down to its target. Her perfect breast. Fuck, she feels so good. With every squeeze, she moaned. He moved his attention to her nipple, pinching it lightly. She responded by pushing her breast further into his hand. Eric decided to test her limits. He gradually pinched harder and harder. Every time he increased the pressure her hips shot up towards his. He was pleasantly surprised by the amount of pain she could take, hell more than take, enjoy. He squeezed even harder, he had never known any chick to take this much. She threw her head back and let out a deep moan.
"Uuughhh! Fuck!" She moaned out then momentarily stopped breathing and her whole body shook, her legs wrapping around his waist trying to anchor herself to something. It took quite a bit of strength on Eric's part to keep her hands pinned to the bed.
He released her nipple as she continued to sporadically shake against him. Taking her jaw in his hand, he turned her face to look at him.
"Did you just cum from that Princess?" he asked in awe.
"Yes," she replied a bit shyly, nervous that he would think something was wrong with her to enjoy certain kinds of pain so much.
"Fuck, you are so damn hot Freya." He said, crushing her lips to his in a bruising kiss.
He released her hands now and ran them all over her. He couldn't get enough of the way she felt under his rough fingertips.
"I need to taste you...Freya, let me taste you. You'll love it, I promise." He knew this was all new to her and didn't want to make her uncomfortable. He figured that telling her his intentions beforehand might be helpful.
"O..ok Eric." She said. Looking at him with a mix of hesitation but complete trust.
He kissed down her body, stopping briefly at her wonderful breast and giving her hardened nipples some attention before moving on. Down her stomach, leaving bite marks on both her hip bones. He made quick work of pulling her underwear off of her. He needed to be face to face with her cunt.
"Damn Freya, you really are perfect. Spread your legs a bit more for me beautiful."
She did as she was told, spreading them as far as she could comfortably. She propped herself up on her elbows to look at him. He looked to be in absolute amazement at the sight of her cunt.
"You ready?" He asked gazing up at her from between her legs.
All she could do was nod her head. Good enough, he thought and dove in. He wanted to taste her more than anything, to see if she was as delicious as he expected. He made a long swipe of his tongue, covering her entire cunt. Fuck, yes she was delicious. He could stay here for days. He lost himself in tasting every inch of her beautiful core. Wiggling his tongue into her tight hole and feeling her clench around it, releasing more deliciousness for him to lap up. He moved to her tiny little clit. Sucking it into his mouth and flicking it slowly with the tip of his tongue. The noises she was making were driving him wild. When she started gasping for air he knew she was close. He slid one finger into her while continuing his attention on her clit and she exploded.
"Holy shit! Eric!" She yelled and dug her hands into the blankets of his bed, arching her cunt into his face. He was loving every second of it. He slowly pulled away from her and moved up to lay on his side next to her. Watching her as she came down from her high. When her breathing finally returned to normal she rolled to her side looking up at him in amazement.
"That was....incredible," she said
"You know what's incredible? How you taste, you're absolutely delicious." He replied. "Here, try it." He leaned in and kissed her deeply. Running his tongue over hers so she could taste herself on him. Then pulled away with a large grin on his face. "See?"
"You're just....ugh. So good. May I?" She said her eyes glancing down at his pants, her hand at the waistband.
"Go ahead Princess, I'm all yours." He rolled onto his back and lifted his hips so that she could pull his pants off.
She got onto her knees and pulled his pants off of him. She wasn't expecting the fact that he wasn't wearing any underwear and was now laying naked before her. Her eyes widen at the sight of him. Yes, definitely larger than average. Seeing his cock standing erect was both scary and an immense turn on. She laid down on her side again, pressed up against him. She kissed his neck until he turned his face to kiss her once again. After mere moments she wrapped her hand around his cock without warning and squeezed, feeling how firm he was for her.
"Holy fuck Freya!" He said pulling his lips away from hers, his hips thrusting upward involuntarily before settling back down.
She quickly let go as though he had burned her. "Are you ok? Was that too hard?" She asked with genuine worry.
Eric grabbed her hand and guided it back to him, wrapping it securely around him once more. "Yes, I'm fine and no, that was nowhere near too hard. Just surprised me, and your hand feels so good wrapped around me. Don't stop Freya, please don't stop." He said and he started guiding her hand up and down his large shaft while peppering kisses along her jaw.
When she tightened her grip slightly and started moving more at her own pace he let go of her hand moving his to tangle into her hair as he assaulted her lips. She moved her hand at a moderate pace. Squeezing him hard as she moved it upwards. Every so often a moan, or in his case a growl, could be heard in his throat. She adjusted her movements to make him make that noise more often. Eventually, she felt liquid, his precum, coming out the tip of his cock.
She was so excited that she was able to make him moan and now make him leak like this. She had to taste him, she hoped that it was acceptable to do so. The women at the monastery had taught them that most men liked the act, and gave them pointers on how to do it properly. Hopefully, all those slightly awkward classes and practice on fruits, and anything else phallic shaped she could find, would pay off now. She sat up on her knees again. Trailing kisses and licks down his neck, across his hard chest, and down his rippling abs.
"Freya..." he said shakily but she ignored him continuing on her path.
"Freya, stop." He commanded.
"Ooh...ok. I'm sorry Eric....I just thought..." she trailed off, so scared that she had done something wrong.
"Freya, it's ok. You don't have to do that. It's fine." He said, completely reading the situation wrong.
"But..." she said hesitantly, biting her lip.
"What?"
"But...I want to." She said shyly, barely loud enough for him to hear. Then she began to ramble. "I understand if you don't want me to, I've never done it before...not for real anyway, just practice on inanimate things, so I'm probably not that good at it. Or you could just not like it. I've heard some guys don't like it. Find it unappeal..."
"Shh, Freya. If you want to then, by all means, go ahead. I just didn't want you to feel obligated is all." Eric said soothingly.
Freya smiled and nodded. Then returned to what she had been doing. Soon she was face to face with the beast itself. She could do this. She knew it. She was the one who had always gave the other girls pointers on how to get things further in their mouth. Well, here it goes. She licked the precum off of him and savored the taste. "Mmmm" she moaned out loud. Salty heaven, she thought to herself. She then began licking all over him. Getting his cock nice and slippery, gliding her hand up and down him more easily now.
When she sucked the head of him into her mouth Eric's eyes rolled into that back of his head. He had been watching her and the sight of him in her mouth was momentarily too much. "Fuuck, yes. Keep going Freya, please." He managed to say.
She began moving up and down his shaft. Sucking slightly as she pulled up, her hand following behind her mouth, covering the bits of his cock she hadn't put in her mouth yet.
"Damn, you're amazing. Fuck!" He moaned out. He hadn't been in her mouth long and it was already the best he had ever had.
"You like it then Eric?" She grinned up at him, taking a small breather whilst still moving her hand up and down him slowly.
"God yes!"
"I'm going to try something, can you stay still for me Eric?" she asked with a glint in her eye.
"I'll do my best, no promises though." He laughed out.
She sucked him back into her mouth once again. Moving her mouth up and down him. Every time she went down she seemed to be taking a little more of him in. Fuck it feels so good he thought to himself. He was a bit surprised that she could take so much of him in. No one else had ever made it much past the halfway point. On her next down stroke, he nearly came. She had taken all of him into her mouth. He was down her tight little throat and it took everything in him not to shoot his cum down it. He gripped her hair holding her there. He didn't mean to, it was a complete reflex. He couldn't get enough of this feeling.
"Holy shit....where did you...how....fuck Freya!" He said as he rocked his cock into her throat as gently as he could. Barely moving it, savoring the feeling of being completely encased in her throat.
She began to move back up and he released his grip on her hair. She nearly pulled her mouth all the way off of him but then took him completely back into her mouth again, this time at a faster pace, then repeated her actions. Eric couldn't take much more of this, he was going to explode. No, not in her mouth. Not this time Eric.
He pulled her off of him and all but threw her onto the bed, quickly covering her body with his. He grabbed her hands and pinned them above her head, kissing her neck. Well, kissing wasn't exactly the right word. More like attacking it.
"Freya I need you. I need to be inside you. Please my beautiful Freya, please tell me you're ready." He said into her neck.
"I'm yours, Eric. Make me yours." She said back to him in the most sultry tone he had ever heard.
"Fuck yes!" He exclaimed. He put her hands on his shoulders, then moved over of his hands under her to grip the back of her neck while the other went down to line his cock up with her entrance.
"Hold on to me Freya. Don't be afraid to tell me to stop or slow down, whatever you need Princess."
"Please Eric.....please" she moaned feeling the head of his cock resting against her opening.
He slowly started to press into her, she was so incredibly hot and wet. He put some more pressure forth trying to get the head into her.
"Fuck Freya. You are so small. Are you ok?" He asked, worried he was hurting her too much already.
"Yesss, keep going" she moaned out. She was loving this stretching feeling. It hurt but in such a good way.
He pressed forward some more. Fuck she's tight. For the first time, he wasn't sure he would actually be able to fit. He began to rock back and forth slowly, trying to loosen her up some. He finally got the head completely in with a moan.
Freya hissed at the feeling. It was so deliciously good.
"Are you ok....is it too much?" Eric asked pausing his movements.
"Yes, Eric. Feels so good. Hurts, but in the best way. Are you going to start fucking me now?" She asked all doe-eyed.
"Freya, umm...I just got the head in. Still, quite a bit left to fit inside you love."
"Fuck, are you serious? I feel like I've been impaled already. Well, keep going then." She said, excited to feel more of him.
He rocked into her again, pressing a bit further with each movement. He reached her barrier, confirming he was indeed the man that was going to make her into a woman. He was thrilled at the thought that his cock was going to be the one to shape her. She would be made just for him, inside and out. He knew this was going to hurt her though. He was going to have to break her and fully sheath himself all in one movement. He needed to be in her completely and in the long run, this would be better for her.
"Freya, hold on to me. This is going to hurt love, I'm so sorry, it can't be avoided," he told her, genuinely feeling terrible for what he was about to do.
"It's ok Eric. Take me." She said without an ounce of fear or hesitation in her voice. She gripped his shoulders and wrapped her legs around his waist.
In one fluid and forceful movement, Eric slammed inside of her. He saw stars and she let out a scream. "Fuck, I'm so sorry Freya. God...fuck, you feel good. I'm so sorry I hurt you. Dammit! Ugghhh" he said, trying to console her and stay still for her to adjust to him, but she felt so damn good wrapped around him. He didn't realize it but he was gently pushing his cock into the depths of her, not moving much, just pushing against bottom over and over again.
Holy fuck that hurt Freya thought to herself. The pain was intense. The sharp pain, the pain she didn't like, was over quickly though. Now this new pain that he was causing with his small little pushes into her, that pain was about to make her explode.
"Eric, it's ok...I'm....fuck that hurts."
He realized then what he had been doing and abruptly stopped. Her hands shot to his hips, digging her fingernails in, pulling him into her again.
"No, keep doing that....please...."
"I'm hurting you Freya." He said after continuing the movement and hearing her hiss.
"Good....good hurt. Gonna cum....don't stop. FUCK!" She yelled and her cunt got even tighter if that were possible. Rippling along his cock, trying to coax his cum out. He wouldn't give in though. He had so much more he wanted to do with her.
"Holy shit Freya!" He stopped his movements so as to keep from cumming, however, her cunt was gripping him so tightly that he doubted he could move anyway at the moment.
When she had finished riding out her orgasm she looked at him and bit her lip. "Umm, can we keep going please?" She asked in the sweetest and innocent way.
"Hell yes, my beautiful girl...I'll give you more." He said with a huge grin on his face. He pulled nearly all the way out of her then pushed back in. Damn, she felt so good.
"Uuuhhh, so good.....gah, you are huge Eric." She said in appreciation
"Hahaha, I know. Not too much for you little girl?" He asked as he kept up his slow pace. In and out, thoroughly enjoying feeling every inch of her.
"Yes...no....I mean I like the too much...ugnnh..." She replied, starting to move her hips a little. Meeting him on his down stroke.
His pace was torture. Too slow. She needed more. "Please Eric....please...." she said incoherently
"What love, what do you need?" He asked pushing into her body again and again. "Tell me Freya, what do you want?"
"More, please...Eric, give me more." She replied....not quite sure what she was asking for.
"As you wish" he smirked and slammed into her. "Was that more?"
"Yesss.....again"
He pulled back and slammed back in, then did it again and again. Picking up his pace. He couldn't believe that she was taking it, and from the look and sound of it, she was loving it. Loving his brutal treatment of her. She was perfect. Made for him in every way. Again he slammed into her. His arms under her upper back, hands gripping her shoulders. Pulling her body into his every thrust. She was a beautiful mess. Moaning, mumbling out unintelligible words at his abuse.
Eric attacked her neck again, biting it. He never let up on his pace and force though. He continued to slam into her, just short of using all his strength. One hand released her shoulder and moved to grip her breast. Squeezing it and pinching her nipples. She came again, but he plowed through it, never even slowing down.
"Fuck yes Freya, cum all over my cock. Fuck you feel so damn good." He felt he come down from her orgasm, well as much as she could with his constant pounding of her body. He ran his hand all over her sweat-slicked skin. Across her chest, her collarbone, up her neck, onto her jaw. He pulled her jaw so she looked at him then he kissed her fiercely, still slamming into her. As he kissed her his hand moved down to her throat, covering it. There was just a slight pressure there but she craned her neck into his hand seeking more.
He felt her cunt quiver as he placed his hand on her throat. Fuck, he wasn't going to last much longer. He wanted to keep this up all night, but realistically that wasn't going to happen. Oh well, we have forever he thought to himself. Without thinking his hands gripped her tighter and he moved even faster. When he heard her gasp for air he remembered that his one hand was around her throat, not on her shoulder like the other. He quickly loosened his grip but her hand moved to his keeping it there.
"No, I like it....don't stop." She said and squeezed his hand so that he was once again squeezing her throat to the point that she could just barely breathe. Fuck....that's it....can't take it.
He pulled her body into his as he slammed into her several more times then came with a roar, yelling her name. He shot stream after stream of hot cum into her body, knowing for sure she could feel every bit of it. As he came he let go of her throat and she got off a final time, covering his cock and pelvis in her feminine cum.
He stayed on top of her, connected, as they both caught their breath. His forehead laying on hers, eyes closed in complete euphoria.
"Wow, Eric.....will it always be like that?"
He pulled his head back and looked at her. "Oh it will be better, this is just the beginning love."
"Holy hell." She breathlessly laughed.
"By the way, did you know that you literally soaked me with that last orgasm. Never had a woman do that before."
"Oh my god!" She tried to hide her face in embarrassment.
"Nuh uh, none of that. It was the hottest things I've ever witnessed. Feel free to cum all over me anytime my sweet Freya." He said, gently kissing away any embarrassment that still remained.
Eventually, he pulled out of her, then helped her get cleaned up in the shower. They returned to her bed, as his was quite a mess now, and wrapped themselves around each other. They fell asleep within minutes, both with a smile on their face. For the first time in several years, Eric slept through the night. When he woke in the morning, with Freya's head on his shoulder and her hand over his heart he couldn't believe how lucky he was. He had finally found his Queen.
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