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LET LOOSE THE SUN	By : gabby1234 Category: Twilight Series > Round Robins Views: 7542 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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EDWARD’S P.O.V.
This was another part of our passion I loved the best, the part where we lied in each others' arms. But then again was there a part I didn’t love best when it came to my wife? She smiled very lazily at me, admittedly when we got in this mode there wasn’t much conversation. We were far from done tonight plenty of experience had taught us that. I gazed back down to her, “Bella do you know how perfect you are?” I smiled as I asked her the question. Bella’s face looked back up to me with an expression of complete and utter love and devotion. All of our time together and I still pondered…. How could I be the one, lucky enough to win her love, her devotion, her trust? Back in the beginning I didn’t think there was a future, it was because of Bella that all that changed.
“Edward, I think maybe we should go back to the house, there’s something I’d like to show you before you known….. We get distracted again.” She smiled as she looked up at me. Bella wasn’t known for being as classically romantic as I was, but she was know to make huge over the top gestures, to show me just how much I meant to her. Damn that silent mind of hers! I would give anything to read her mind when I told her she was perfect, or that she was beautiful. Back when she was alive I could hear her heartbeat or see her cheeks redden; instant gratification for me and I truly missed it. I helped her to her feet, not that she needed it, and we walked at a leisurely pace back to our home. It seemed almost too surreal and a tad humorous that we should be walking completely naked in the meadow and back to our fairy tale home. Sometimes I think back to when Alice told me that I would face a turning point in my life when it came to Bella, I remember feeling that turning her was the wrong way to go, sometimes I wonder what would have happened if I hadn’t. That thought seriously depressed me at times. It still would have been me in the end that would have damned us both if that had happened. But Bella belonged to me, I as belonged to her; could there be a world without us together? I mulled these thought in my head as she explained her day with Ness and Jacob, funny how we were becoming alright with the concept, though I suppose the fact that there wasn’t much we could do about it, had a lot to do with that situation, Jacob was here to stay; Ness would simply fall apart if Jacob wasn’t around. Bella and I had discussed this together with Jacob a million times. Jacob always pointed out that I was 100 years old than Bella, but we would always say that there wasn’t a complicated love triangle involving me Charlie and Renee, in the end though it was obvious; Jacob loved Ness like she was the sun…what more could a father ask for? I was listening to Bella’s day half ways, just wondering what her gift was. I thought about mine and smiled our first anniversary… Bella loves homemade gifts and I’m sure I had made the perfect one. I couldn’t wait to try it on her, my mouth twitched in anticipation.

Bella’s p.o.v.
I could tell he wasn’t listening about Ness’ and Jacob’s hunt today; that damn smirk of his reassured me of that. I could feel the anticipation also, it’s wasn’t like I could wait either to exchange gifts. One year ago to this date was our wedding; I smiled repeatedly at the thought. I hoped he like my gift, I’d spent this whole year on learning piano with some help from rose. I made him a lullaby like he had for me when we first got together. It was hard to get away with it to, obviously with Edward around so much. In fact it was seldom and far in between that I had a chance to practice; also I was very nervous because I planned to sing this lullaby to him, and even though my voice sounded like a bell it didn’t increase my confidence. I would always immediately stop if he was near, this had to be a total surprise and of course it really delayed my progress. It was a perfect idea really. Besides what do you get a guy who has everything he already wants anyways? I let a small chuckle escape my lips when I thought back to Edwards idea of gifts. How many times had I told him that I was happy with homemade gifts? And every time it was ignored, well actually not every time I count the c.d. with my lullaby as my first gift; and the seconded was Edward bringing Jacob to our wedding. But if you accounted for the diamond he claimed was glass, and two over the top cars and it was easy to see that Edward had no concept of “homemade” gift. My other part to my gift was a ballet that Ness would be doing tomorrow. I planned to play Chopin nocturne number 10 in e minor, not any easy feet. But I’m sure Ness would be perfect no matter what regardless. It seemed like she always was as graceful as equally as she was beautiful and intelligent. The one thing I found sad about all of this was that she was growing WAY WAY to fast! Less than a year old and it seemed like she was two and a half with super powers; it’s something no one tries to think about. Ness is all I have, my only claim to motherhood and what a shame to figure out that I really love children, mine and Edward’s our embodiment forever, when she was born it was like I was born into motherhood, and now my darling was growing way to fast for her own good, suddenly there was a frown on my face.

EDWARD’S P.O.V.

I took that as my queue to sweep her off her feet, I had no idea what had gotten into her but just as well I loved to do this and often I couldn’t pull this stunt off unless she was preoccupied. I have no idea why Bella’s so extremely backward from my time, it’s not like chivalry is completely dead! She hates old world chivalry with a passion; strange that she should be so perfect for me; and yet so opposite in fundamental basics such as this.
“Edward you can put me down already I promise I’m not in a bad mood. I was just thinking about Ness…about her turning one.” Her smile was then very sad and her eyes wee demanding of my actions. “Bella”, I replied “there’s no way I’m putting you down. I don’t know how many times I have to tell you that this is my role as your husband. And don’t think you can distract me either with Ness’ predicament this night is all about us”. I kissed the top of her head breathing all of her scent that I could. Once we were in the door I took us to our lovely bedroom, the one we continually had to replace from all our thrashings to it.
“Bella can I give you my gift first?” I had been waiting for this moment for days, and here it finally was. I rushed into our huge closet and carefully pulled out my small homemade package. If I was forced to accept Jacob in my life as a son-in-law then I might as well take a few advantages of it. Jacob had once made a charm bracelet for Bella, at the time I really wasn’t that angry or hurt but I wanted so badly for her to accept my gift and be mine that I thought I could trick her into wearing a diamond. She probably still hasn’t forgotten. This time around though, I decided to grab Jacob and asked him to teach me how to crave wood, she was bound to love what I made for her. There were other things though I preferred to get her, new clothes perhaps, or a lovely piece of jewelry, possibly another car, but Bella insisted that we keep it simple personal, she never had much as a child so it really shocked me that she never wanted more now. Admittedly I came from a poor family as well so when Carlisle took me in I was quick to spend money on my hearts whim. Of course it didn’t last long. Being a vampire dose make a lot of human toys boring. Why have boats or trinkets or laptops or cameras when I can see any place I want to easily? The cars well that still something of an indulgence for us that Bella never really jumped onto. Besides after 100 years of solitude all I could want to see or feel is Bella. I emerged from the closet holding her gift, we were both still completely nude so I wrapped her body in mine “open it” I whispered into her ear.

Bella’s point of view:

I looked into his eyes and I couldn’t fight the smile that broke out “I really hope this isn’t another ““Glass” heart Edward” we both laughed. I’ve just never been one for diamonds, I really like his mother’s ring it was simple, beautiful really and while there were diamonds in it there was still a quality a simplicity I adored. “Come on Bella open it already” he whined. I unhinged the box and pulled out what seemed to be….. a craving a miniature sculpture of me and Edward it was perfect all the details were literally right on point “How did you do this Edward… I love it?”
“Do you, I had Jacob help of course, but the idea for it is all my own.” He gloated and I was happy for him as well. The figurine was a perfect scene to our perfect night, he craved us lying on the meadow floor together. There were two other figurines as well I delicately pulled them out of the box. The other figurine was of us on our wedding day, and the last was the whole family…. truly beautiful. “Do you always have to out do me” I asked a smile playing on my lips “ Come now Bella I’m sure your gift is equally as good. You’ve worked so hard to keep it secret for so long, I really would like to see it now.”
He had been really impatient about it. Alice had done what I asked and kept it from him it wasn’t hard to get the others to help, but Alice some how always let things slip, she was just bubbly that way. “Alright”, I conceded, “but we need to go into the parlor for it, it’s in there.”
There was an awkward look to his face; he didn’t know that rose had snuck the piano in while we were out, just one of the many perks of having a super strong vampire family. As we entered the parlor I noticed he looked even more confused. I hoped he wasn’t disappointed “Edward just give me a seconded okay?” I was so horribly nervous thank goodness I couldn’t blush.

EDWARD’S P.O.V.

I had a feeling it had something to do with music! I could tell that Bella had been trying to learn something behind my back and naturally assumed it was piano, but this? What was this and, where was it going? I always felt with Bella, that I never really know what’s going on in her head, of course that is what I love about her, but I also sometimes find it horribly frustrating. She came back out into the parlor dressed in a peach satin robe I had given her, I could tell she was nervous now; usually she didn’t bother to cover herself up when were alone. I assumed she was going to do something that would be hard for her. She placed all my figurines on the piano and sat down. I could fell the tension and anxiety for her, it was apparent in just the way she sat down, what was my silly little darling doing?
“Bella do I get to find out now?” I probed, “Just sit in the chaise Edward and please don’t make a sound till I’m finished.” I did as I was told, obedient to her every whim like always. And then it began a strange melody. Is this what it was about, had Bella been learning the piano for me? It was a beautiful wonderful piece full of major 7ths and 9ths arranged into a beautiful harmony; this was very sweet. And then her voice cut in, ironically like a bell soft at first and then growing into the melody, her words were beautiful and to wonderful for my ears. It was like composing a song of praise our hymn and it filled my body with pure unadulterated happiness, my eyes poured over her face committing this memory to my mind for eternity, as I basked in the glory of her words.

“More than glittered shells or shimmer sand
A playground shaped like an hourglass, Don't you feel? My Will? My Hands?
Strange power
This Witching Hour, This exotic peeling taste, Here comes Twilight Hour
Then once over, kills the bloom
At light hour evaporates
All dream parachutes

Between worlds, Breaking dawn lets loose of sun
A lesson twisted message from
A captive in estranged freedom
Against the shades
The rested dreamer
Wants to see her, This brand of love escalates, Best live for the night
Says of fluid mind, Sweet starlings
Come now
To our downy nest, the Breaking dawn lets loose of sun”

Her voice began to waver and I immediately understood. “The night!” I said aloud “Over our love at night, that was what this beautiful lullaby was about, and that the “breaking dawn” letting loose of the sun meant there was no end to our passion.” Her dreams are all reality for her now. She was breaking what was left of my heart with all the love I could feel bleeding through me. I smiled so wide that I thought I would pull back all my skin. Her smile of course was sheepish as she replied “as always Edward you never fail to catch a meaning.” I ran to her wrapping her in my arms and allowing this “breaking dawn” to cascade over our nights, and all of our life forever. I felt it so deep down my pure love for her. In her eyes I could see; even without reading those thoughts she reviled to me now that she and I were one. “I love you Bella forever.” I exclaimed it like it was my first breath all over again; the world finally coming into view and my body was hers. I tilted her heard up to mine and kissed her with all of our combined passion finally we were on the verge of the love making I was looking for. The kind that would be so soft and special the kind of sex that has another passion to it, the one that is only granted in dreams, once again I picked her up and walked to our room, this time for the night. I was so glad that vampires couldn’t sleep what a perfect evening to a prefect eternity. “I promise Bella from now on it will only be twilight hours and breaking dawns for us.”
Her sweet kiss, her loving kiss, wound up the last free nerves I had left in my body tonight we would consume all we could of each other.

A few notes- one the beautiful lullaby was written 100% by ichi.ruki. She's great at her work and if you wish to view the poem in its entirety you can go to this site http://kaiestblue.livejournal.com/
she really is an amazing writer! Also to WBTH in case you didn't get my message earlier simply put- if you don't like it don't read it okay? I don't appreciate my work being completely negatively criticized. In your words: "Do "us" all a favor" and with my words: "stop trolling". I write this because I love the twilight series and Edward and Bella so I'm going to continue to enjoy it and hope others can as well. I'll admit I'm crap at writing, but the way you phrase things comes off as offensive and destructive.
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