Eden: The Real Story | By : BiGayBoy Category: A through F > Bible Views: 4269 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
Disclaimer: I do not own the copyright for the Bible, nor any of these characters apart from Steve. I do not make any money from the writing of this story. |
Hey, guys! Here is Chapter 2! This one is quite a bit longer than Chapter 1. A word of explanation. All conversations with the Devil are in Spanish. However, after every phrase or so, there is an intercut section that translates the phrases, which are numbered. This is the only chapter the Devil will appear in, so it is the only chapter that will have this. Hope you enjoy! :P
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As soon as God had ascended back into Heaven, Adam looked at Steve. “I'm Adam,” he said.
“I'm Steve.”
“Well, Steve,” said Adam, having no clue that he would one day be quoted by an international spy named Austin Powers, “Shall we shag now or shag later?”
Steve got a huge grin on his face, and his cock instantly grew rock hard. Man, it was perfect. Unlike Adam, Steve was circumcised. His beautiful round head looked lovingly at its mate. Steve strutted sexily over to Adam, his cock wagging in front of him. As their lips melded together, Adam thought life couldn't get any better than this. Then Steve's cock started rubbing against his. Adam gasped, wanting that slab of solid meat to go straight down his throat.
As if reading his husband's mind, Steve Whispered in his ear, “Suck it, Baby.”
Adam sure as hell didn't need to be told twice. He trailed his lips from Steve's. They moved down his throat, over his marble-like chest, down his solid six-pack abs, and over his pubes. At the base of the long shaft, Adam stuck out his tongue, and licked the length of it. Steve's whole body shuddered at the feel of his man's tongue on his member.
Adam took the tip in his mouth, and sucked it hard.
“Fuck yes!” yelled Steve. “Suck that head!”
Adam took in the rest of the cock, inch by inch. Steve was extremely close to releasing his load. Adam started going to fucking town. His head seemed like he was bobbing for apples. Except ten times as fast.
“Holy shit!” Steve yelled at the top of his lungs. “It's cumming! It's cummmmmiiiiinnnnngggg!!!!!”
And cum it did. Steve shot rope after rope of white lava down down Adam's esophagus. Adam swallowed every last bit of this perfect specimen's love potion. Steve grabbed Adam, and pulled him upward, wrapping his legs around his waist. As they kissed, Steve pinned him against a tree full of bright red apples. Still holding him, Steve spread Adam's legs and shoved all ten inches of his boner straight up Adam's beautiful ass. Adam gasped in pain. There hadn't been any pain when God had stuck twelve-and-a-half inches up him. Then, he thought, God had probably did some kind of magic to make it not hurt. After about two seconds, though, the pain was replaced by a feeling almost as amazing as when God had fucked him.
As his gorgeous husband loosened up his tight hole, Adam moaned loudly. “Fuck, Baby, please don't stop! Christ that's fucking amazing!”
Steve pounded his ass for almost an hour, holding back every time he felt like cumming. He knew instinctively that if he held back long enough, the cum would shoot out more than ever. Adam had already busted three different times. Finally, Steve smiled at his husband. It was time. “Are you ready for this?”
"Baby,” said Adam. “I was born ready.”
Then Steve let it go. He counted 396 shots of cum shooting out of his cock. Adam screamed in ecstasy. “Oh, my God,” Adam breathed. “What a fuck.”
Then they heard footsteps. As they looked over, a man was approaching. He was amazing. His chest was even more perfect than either of theirs. He had 8-pack abs. His hair was fiery red, and hung cascaded in waves halfway down his back.. His cock was hard as could be, and damn near as long as God's. His skin was so tan, almost a light red.
“Well, hello,” said Adam.
“And who is this sexy beast?” asked Steve.
“El nombre es Lucifer,” he said with a slight accent. Centuries later, the language he spoke would be called Spanish. Adam and Steve instinctively knew he was saying, 'The name's Lucifer.' “Pero prefiero el apodo de Diablo.”(1).
“Soy Adam,” Adam said, introducing them. “Y este es mi esposo, Steve.” (2)
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My name is Lucifer. But I prefer the nickname Diablo.
I am Adam. And this is my husband, Steve.
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“Hola, Adam y Steve. Dios realmente se ha superado a si mismo , porque nunca h visto tales bellezas.” (3)
“Eres bastante jodidamente sexy, tu mismo,” said Adam. (4)
“Bueno,” said Diablo, “en el cielo, todos los angeles son hermosos.” (5)
“Eres un `angel?” asked Steve, impressed. (6)
“Desde luego!” Diablo replied. “Yo soy el esposo de Dios.” (7)
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Hello, Adam and Steve. God has really outdone himself, because I have never seen such beauties.
You're pretty fucking sexy, yourself.
Well, in Heaven all the angels are sexy.
You're an angel?
Of course! I am God's husband.
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“Oh, no!” Adam said, going pale. (8)
“Cu`al es el problema, Adam?” Diablo asked, concerned. (9)
“Lo siento mucho. Tuve relaciones alucinantes con tu marido! Si hubiera sabido...” (10)
Diablo just laughed. “Por favor, no te preocupes por eso. Mi esposo es un jugador. El ha follado casi todos los angeles. all`i arriba. Estoy acostumbrado a compartirlo.” (11)
“Uf!” breathed Adam. “Estoy tan contento de escuchar eso. Pense que era carne muerta.” (12)
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8. Oh, no! (Same in Spanish as in English)
9. What is the problem, Adam?
10. I am so sorry. I had mind-blowing sex with your husband! If I had known...
11. Please do not worry about that. My husband is a player. He has fucked almost all the angels up there. I'm used to sharing him.
12. Whew! I am so glad to hear that. I thought I was dead meat.
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“Debo decirte, sin embargo,” said Diablo seductively. “si pensabas que el sexo con Dios era alucinante, tendrias el mayor cum aun conmigo. Sin mencionar los trios son increibles!” (13)
“Oh, enserio?” asked Adam just as seductively, both him and Steve going rock hard. “Que dicen que probamos esa teoria?” (14)
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13. I must tell you, though, If you thought that sex with God was mind-blowing, you would have the best cum of your life with me. Not to mention threesomes are incredible!
14. Oh, really? What say we test that theory?
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Diablo grinned huge, and grabbed his erection, stroking it as he stepped up to Adam. “Adam,” Diablo instructed, “me acostare. Te arrodillas sobre mi cabeza y te chupo la polla. Steve, abres tu trasero y te sientas en mi polla. Saltando arriba y abajo tan fuerte y rapido como puedas.” (15)
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15. Adam, I'll lie down. You kneel over my head, and I'll suck your cock. Steve, you open your ass, and sit on my cock, bouncing up and down as hard and fast as you can.
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Doing as he said, Adam got in position above Diablo. As Diablo started sucking his cock all at once, He screamed in delight. Steve spread his ass cheeks apart, and lowered himself down onto Diablo's long, thick boner. The pain was immense, but was gone as quickly as it came, replaced by a pleasure he had never imagined possible. He started riding Diablo's cock like a a fucking stallion, screaming at the bliss it brought him. Before he knew it, He was shooting streams of thick gooey semen. Then both Diablo and Adam came at the exact same time. Adam moaned as the delicious nut poured down his throat. Adam cried out in ecstasy as Diablo shot 900 ropes of hot, thick cum up into his body. Then Diablo had him get off, and lay on his side. Then he laid down behind him, and ordered Adam to lay down behind him. Then Diablo wrapped his leg around Steve's waist, and had Adam do the same to him.
“Ahora,” Diablo said to Adam, “Cuando meta mi polla en el culo de Steve, metes la tuya en la mia. Se llama tren, y es la mejor experiencia de trio que jamas tendras.” (16)
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16. Now, when I put my cock in Steve's ass, you put yours in mine. It's called a train, and it's the best threesome experience you will ever have.
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As Diablo's cock went in Steve's ass, and Adam's cock went in Diablo's ass, they all yelled in delight. The pain was no longer there, as they were all used to it now. They rode the train, fucking for all they were worth. It was out-of-this-world amazing! They were only fucking for about 5 minutes before they all came at the exact same time, moaning loudly in harmony. Then they all got up, and Diablo turned to them.
“Tengo que ir ahora,” he told them, “pero volvere muy pronto. Lo prometo.” (17)
He kissed them both, his tongue melding perfectly with theirs. Then, in a huge, fiery flame, he was gone.
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17. I have to go now. But I will be back very soon. I promise.
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As soon as Diablo was gone, Adam and Steve heard another set of footsteps.
“Damn,” said Steve. “Our bodies are popular in these parts.”
But, to their surprise, it was God. And the look on his face was sad.
“Master,” said Adam. “What's wrong?”
“I'm very upset,” he told them. “But not at you. It wasn't your fault.”
“What do you mean?” Steve asked.
“Do you have any idea who you just had sex with?”
“Of course,” said Steve. “Diablo.”
“His name is not Diablo,” said God. “That is just another name for Devil. His name is Lucifer.”
“He's your husband,” said Adam. “We're so sorry.”
“He's not my husband,” God told them. “He is a liar.”
“What?!?” said Adam and Steve together.
“He was my husband,” said God. “I cast him out of Heaven when I caught him having sex with my Messenger angel, Gabriel. Lucifer had deceived him, and made him think things about me that were not true. The same way he did to seduce the two of you.”
Adam and Steve were dismayed. They had been lied to just for a quick fuck.
“But I know you enjoyed the threesome,” God told them.
Adam and Steve looked guiltily at the ground. They had enjoyed it, which made the whole situation even worse.
“It's not a bad thing,” said God. “Threesomes are magical.” Adam and Steve both agreed with that. “If you ever want to have another threesome, I will give it to you.”
They looked at him, excited. “But at another time,” God added. “Right now, I have a question for you.”
Adam and Steve looked at him, curious. “What is that?” Adam asked.
“How would the two of you like to start a family?”
“A family?” Steve asked excitedly.
“Yes,” God said. “If you want, I can wed the two of you, binding the two of you forever. Then I can let you become impregnated, and give birth to children.”
Adam and Steve were happier than they had ever been. “We'd love that,” Steve said.
“Very well,” God said. “Follow me.”
God led Adam and Steve into a large grove. As they stepped into it, they heard music playing. They looked at the place, awestruck. Hundreds of sexy naked angels with big white wings and rocking bodies hovered in the air, playing musical instruments. Strands of lavender hung over it like a canopy. At the front was a raised platform of beautiful wood. Standing on it was a naked angel with a cock that could give God a run for his money. God led them over to the podium, and they saw that the angel held a satin pillow with two beautiful diamond rings. God removed his robe, and stood in front of them, beautifully nude. He ordered them to stand facing each other. As they did, the music stopped, and God spoke the words that would become the words spoken at most weddings from then on out.
“Dearly beloved,” he said. “We are gathered here this glorious day to bear witness to the joining of Adam and Steve. All of us need and desire to love and be loved. Adam and Steve, your marriage today is the blissful joining of your souls that have already been united as one in your hearts. Marriage will allow you to share your lives together, standing together to face life and the world hand-in-hand. Marriage will expand you as individuals, define you as a couple, and deepen your love for one another. So let your marriage be a time of waking each morning and falling in love with each other all over again. Adam, do you take Steve to be your lawful wedded husband? To have and to hold from this day forward? For better or for worse, for richer or for poorer, in sickness and in health, for as long as you both shall live?”
“I do,” vowed Adam.
“And do you, Steve, take Adam to be your lawful wedded husband? To have and to hold from this day forward? For better or for worse, for richer or for poorer, in sickness and in health, for as long as you both shall live?”
“I do,” Steve vowed.
“Then by the power vested in me by the Kingdom of Heaven, I now pronounce you Husbands for life. Adam, you may fuck his ass.”
Adam smiled and Steve got down on his hands and knees. Adam shoved his cock in his husband's ass, and fucked him hard. After a few moments, he moaned loudly, as his seed shot into Steve's asshole. God and the angels applauded, and Adam and Steve stood up and shared a long, passionate kiss. God stepped up to them.
“Steve,” he said. "The cum that just went into your ass will form a baby inside of you. You will carry this child for nine months, and will experience a lot of changes. Lucifer has been banned from ever again being able to enter this garden. An angel with a flaming sword has been posted at the entrance. I promise you this: I will be here to help you every step of the way.”
“Thank you, Lord,” Steve said happily.
"Thank you," Adam said, glad they would never again have to worry about Lucifer again.
“Adam,” God said, “and Steve, welcome to your new life as husbands and parents.”
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Hey, guys! So sorry about any confusion. I guess I messed up on the disclaimer by saying I don't own the Bible, so they hid the story until I fixed it. I kind of thought that was strange, as the Bible has been around for thousands of years, and has been changed by so many people and has so many publishers, there's no telling who the actual copyright goes to. But I fixed the disclaimer, so you guys should be able to see this soon. And know that I am working on the next chapter, but it's not quite ready yet. I promise to put it up as soon as I finish it. I am also working on two other projects: "After The War," on the Harry Potter story manager, & "iDaddy" on the iCarly section of the Television story manager. If you can, I'd appreciate you guys reading those and commenting. I love you guys, and your comments and responses help me more than you could know. Love ya! Toodles!
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