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The Garden of Heden	By : Nixofcyzerra Category: A through F > Bible Views: 7229 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own the religious writings/book this fanfiction is written for, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story

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I HAVE UPDATED!! *Waits untill applause, cheers, and cries of "I want to carry your child!!!" die down.* Thank you, thank you... I would like to take this opportunity to thank all those who have reviewed(All those who haven't first feel free to skip this bit, and THEN REVIEW YOU LAZY GOODFORNOTHING--calms down). To Peaches: (Thanks; I know doesn't work, but I couldn't resist, and as for the P.S, Damn those lucky bastards!! :) To Zizzle, thanks for the review, Hilarious, I'll try to keep up the good work. (if it is good, I mean, I don't know) To all other reviewers, "THANK YOU!!" Your comments mean a lot. And now, the moment you've all been waiting for...

THE DISCLAIMER!!: If anyone owns Adam, Eve and the angel Gabriel, it ain't me. The lady viper is my OC, Mine to write about, fantasize over, and keep chained to my bed. SO THERE!!!

Chapter 3: The punishments (No BDSM, soz)

Scene 3 (Next day)

Adam awoke to sounds of low groans that he recognized as Eve bringing herself to orgasm. She was getting close, he could tell (No shit, I mean, a girl's moaning profanities, groaning, sometimes shrieking in pleasure in front of you, do you have to be a rocket scientist?). He opened his eyes to see Eve facing the other way, sitting with her long legs out in front of her, taking herself to ecstasy. God, how he loved her legs. He loved what was between them a lot more (Again, no shit. he's banged her six ways from sunday, and suddenly, Oh I can't stand sex). He moved to sit behind her, starting to fondle her breasts when he suddenly noticed she had a cock-shaped object shoved up her gash. He waited until the last shudder caused by her orgasms had subsided, not wanting to spoil her pleasure, and then asked her where she got it. In answer, Eve smiled, stood up and began to walk, gesturing for Adam to follow. 40 minutes later Adam, Eve and Viper started the first threesome. (GET IN THERE, ADAM!!!)

The three of them were approaching climax. Adam was unsure at first, but the sight of Eve and Viper 69-ing, their sexual juices running over the other, soon got his juices flowing (I can see why). Adam was given six hand jobs (2 by Eve, 2 by Viper, 2 by both at once), eight tit jobs (twice by Eve, twice by Viper and four times by both at once), four blowjobs (twice by Eve, twice by Viper) and 69-ed twice (one with each). Eve and Viper were fingered and fisted five times each (twice each by Adam, thrice by each other), given oral sex eight times each (four times each by Adam, four times by each other) and 69-ed seven times each (four times each by Adam, thrice with each other (That¡¯s twenty times each!! ...Er, yeah, I can do that¡¦). The air was humid and stank of cum and pussy juice. They lay in a heap, recovering from the price their extreme climaxes had cost. Then Viper turned to Adam, and said, ¡°Now, that was an orgy!¡±

Both Adam and Eve lay there, remembering what God had said to them about remaining faithful. They knew what he meant now. ¡°Adam, what have we done?¡± Eve whispered. Adam didn¡¯t answer. They both already knew. They had sinned, and were ashamed (I would have thought it was worth it, personally.)

A few hours later, as they had foreseen, God appeared with three angel-bitches once more, 2 of them being pleasured with one hand each, their cries of pleasure rising as time went on, while the other, the hot piece of angel-bitch Gabriel, sucked Gods red-hot 13-inch cock even harder than before (13 inches!! 13 inches!!!!! Erm, um, yeah, tiny compared to mine. Horses cry when they see mine). The sight of her slight, delicate, sweltering body with her moist lips licking and massaging the lord¡¯s mighty tool was incredible.

Adam, Eve and Viper watched this display of intense pleasure for a couple of seconds, and then they all got horny and began to finger themselves. Teenagers... The sight and sounds of others moaning, panting, and generally being short of breath turned them on further, so that in a matter of minutes, all those present came loudly and messily, their fluids coating the surroundings.

Presently, God spoke his thoughts and decisions. ¡° Adam, Eve, you have betrayed my trust by succumbing to temptation in the form of Viper. For this you must be punished. However, you were deceived, and knew not the implications of your actions. Therefore, you will be punished leniently. You will have to leave the garden and enter the world beyond soon. Viper, you have destroyed the safe paradise here by robbing my creations of innocence. You did this using the pleasures of the flesh, so I will punish you with pleasure. Sure.

Suddenly, Viper fell to her knees. The others stared on as she arched her back and groaned. Suddenly fluids exploded out of her pussy. Orgasm after orgasm flowed through her body. This was the third most intense sexual experience to ever exist. It lasted for almost a half-hour, each culmination more intense than the last, her liquids coating the ground around her (Ooh, Daddy likes). Just when the pleasure had reached its peak, her moans ended unexpectedly, without warning. Viper frowned and started to finger her pussy herself. Nothing happened. Her eyes full of tears, Viper raised her head and gazed at God. She understood she would never feel pleasure from her gash again. She stood up, shaking slightly but staying silent.

Next moment, there was a small crack as a figure dressed in red and black shimmered into this plane of existence. It brought a small smile to Gods face, a look of intense envy to Eve¡¯s face, a look of awe and submission crossed Viper¡¯s, and Adam just got a stiffy. Like I said before, not the only one.

The figure was possibly the most unbelievably beautiful, irresistible and undeniably sexy hotty ever. She had black and red hair, with crimson eyes to match, and was dressed in a red and black cat suit even more skin-tight than Viper¡¯s. With a red cloak to finish, she could be called the pinnacle of physical perfection. At least in a man¡¯s eyes. Her figure was slim, with her curves huge yet flawless. Her most distinguishing feature were, however, her breasts. They were about, oh I don¡¯t know two feet long. (Take that Katie price!!)

¡°Ah, Satan. Nice of you to join us at last,¡± cried the all-powerful deity. ¡°I hope you don¡¯t mind the current state of your servant, but I couldn¡¯t resist.¡±

¡°I wouldn¡¯t worry about it, if I were you. She will not be in my active service for much longer,¡± the woman who would have been the envy of many a hard-core porn star replied. She turned to her fallen servant. ¡°You have failed me Viper, and you know my tolerance for failure. With my negative, my opposites approval, I sentence you to 2000 years of servitude in heaven, giving pleasure in your current state to the deceased who when alive, were in the holy order. You will suck those sex-starved popes, bishops, abbots and priests shrivelled and unused cocks for two millennia. And spitting is out of the question.¡±

As soon as those words left her mouth, she turned her head to her rival, who nodded his head, and with that, Viper vanished screaming and cursing.

God and Satan turned to each other, moved away and began to converse in hushed tones. After a moment, she walked over to Adam, who stood there rooted to the spot, eyes bulging (Amongst other things).

¡°As a thank you for helping me in my plans, and as a gift knowing what your lord has in store for you, I bequeath this unto you¡± she declared.

She dropped to her knees in front of him and leaned towards his swollen member. He closed his eyes, quivering in anticipation. 8 seconds later, he opened them again. The reason being that no cock sucking was taking place at all. Her tits, being literally water-melon sized, stopped her from getting close enough to even stick her tongue out and lick his todger (*giggles again* todger...) She merely shrugged, sat him down on a nearby rock and began to unzip her outfit. She stopped halfway down and shrugged off the top half of her suit, revealing her stunning, colossal breasts that made up ¨÷ of her body weight. She reached forward once more, sandwiched his swollen cock between her chest, and started to wank him off with her tits(Her tits. Her wondrous tits. She must have had a steel spine to support those mountains. They were so tight together Adam started getting friction burns. Every time he came, steam rose from her stupendous torso.). 10 minutes later, his cock looked like raw hamburger but he was very happy. God worked his magic, and it was as good and long as before. The next second, the sexy embodiment of evil was gone.

God spoke. ¡°You have 4 hours until you have to leave Heden. I suggest you use them wisely.¡±

Excuse me... I need to be by myself for a while... * 5 minutes, I mean 80 minutes later* O.k, I'm bac. Ahem...

Give me an R..... R!

Give me an &..... &!

Give me another R..... R!

What does that spell R&R!!!!!!!!!!! First time!!! Take that high school english teacher!!!!

Once again, I remind that the story is finished, but I won't update till I have 5 reviews per uploaded chapter!! NEVER SURRENDER!!!!

15 reviews for chapter!!

If you'll excuse me, my lady snake is calling... R&R!!!

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