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The Garden of Heden	By : Nixofcyzerra Category: A through F > Bible Views: 7229 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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I... am... impressed! I've recieved the required number of reviews to update in 1/20th the time! Anyway, this is the final chapter, so... ONCE MORE WITH FEELING!!!!

Disclaimer: I have spoken with the vatican, and you are actually read text written by THE OWNER OF GOD AND SATAN. I'm just joking, I don't believe in them; therefore I cannot own them. The exception is Lady Viper, my OC/Love slave...

Chapter 4: The erotic exit, and a very horny devil...

Adam and Eve were finally having full-on, sweaty, incredible sex. (Took them long enough.) Adam and Eve were fucking on top of a rock in the garden of Heden. She was on top, her own weight increasing the penetration. It wasn’t needed, however. Their crutches weren’t even connected. His cock, huge even when normal, had grown so great it was actually suspending her a few inches above him. (Happens to me all the time.) He wrapped his legs around her and pulled her closer to him, pushing his cock deeper into her lower body. The action forced further orgasms out of her pussy and made her groan in a confusing mixture of bliss and pain. It ended with each one of them coming one last, wonderful time and then, reluctantly, he pulled away, out of her and hugged her tight.

Adam was still hard. They had fucked for 45 minutes straight, had caused more pleasure in each other than any other lovers ever would, and Adam was still as stiff as a board. They looked at each other for a moment that seemed to last an eternity, then as one, they turned their heads to look at the slow-moving waterfall behind them. (Kinky bastards.)

They stood in the centre of the waterfall, in the others embrace. The water was cold, but not too cold. Enough to sensitive their bodies to the point that they nearly came just looking at each other. They kissed once, passionately, as if they were only safe while in each other’s arms. Then they moved apart, and Eve moved her wonderful body in a pivot, so she was facing the other way, offering her extraordinary rear to her one true love. He didn’t hesitate. Rushing forwards, he plunged his 10-inch cock deep into her backside. He thrusted harder and harder, spurred on by her moans of gratification. The cold water made them more responsive than they were naturally, so they came harder and harder. Eve’s breasts, Eve’s pussy, they all turned Adam on more and more. Eve’s breasts, Eve’s pussy, they all gave her pleasure beyond anything felt previously. When they came for the last time together in the garden of heden, they would never feel more alive again.

It was growing dark when God appeared. Adam and Eve stood there, unflinching; their sexual organs still coated with the others juices. They stared at each other for a moment, and then the ruler of Heaven spoke:

“You, my creations, have been fairly disappointing. I blame myself for not warning you of the temptations sent by my nemesis. Partially as an apology, and partially as a lesson to you, I will give you holy pleasure and then pass judgement upon you.”

He turned to Adam. He spoke a short yet unpronounceable word, and the sexiest of all angel-bitches, Gabriel appeared, naked as before bar the tiniest black thong ever made, especially sculpted for Gabriel’s arse. Her tits were small, but interestingly erotic.

Adam sat down suddenly on a rock that he was sure had not been there before. The horny angel-bitch stood in front of the mortal man and began to dance. Gabriel danced before him, slowly moving her hands over her nubile, lithe body. She took hold of her tiny g-string sexily and started to remove it, revealing the hidden treasures within. Her pussy seemed to radiate pure energy that Adam couldn’t understand, but found alluring as hell. (Once had an Ex-girlfriend that did that, but it turned out to be a mini-flash-light.) She began to finger herself until he was immensely hard and she then stopped walking and kneeled in front of him. She took the top of his erection in her mouth and began to suck and lick it gently .He closed his eyes in satisfaction, then opened them again swiftly as she opened her mouth for a second time and took his entire cock into her throat. She began to suck harder. It was as if a tornado was in her mouth. He came almost instantly, and was hard again by the time the last drop of cum had left it. Gabriel sucked Adam’s cock harder. She sucked it harder than she had ever sucked a cock before, making him cum four times in a minute. God was Godsmacked. (Hee, hee, get it? GoDsmacked…) Gabriel had never sucked him off so hard, and while she was using one hand to increase Adam’s pleasure, her other hand was inside her gash, fisting and fingering herself intently. God grimaced. He would have to make her try that on him.

After it was over, Adam’s cock empty of spunk, God stepped forward and laid one hand on Gabriel’s shoulder. She came instantly, and vanished.

“Now I shall pass judgement on you, Adam. Know that with effort, the action I now undertake will one day be reversed.”

The next second, Adam felt the most bizarre feeling in his spent member. Looking down, he gasped and watched in horror as his “tool” began to shrink. At 3 inches, it ceased. (It looked like a small child’s thumb!!) He stepped back, tears flowing and both Eve and her pussy cried out in anguish. (Interesting sight.) He knew that God had also made him last a lot less, and taken away the gift of multiple cumming he had given him in the recreation. He would only feel that once every time from now on.

God now turned to Eve, who trembled in fearful expectation. God gestured and Eve levitated into the air, floated over to his throne, and then rose higher into the air. God sat down in his throne, and Eve descended so her elegant pussy was level with the lord’s face. The power affecting her moved her so her quivering gash was centimetres away from his face. His tongue darted out, quadrupled in size and proceeded to give her fanny a good licking. A very good licking. It was incredible. Every area his tongue touched seemed to have had an erogenous zone appear the previous moment. Her fluids gushed out of her, in such great quantities that God had to use his powers to re-hydrate her to prevent her becoming a dried-out corpse. She could have been the first woman to come to death. (An ex of mine was the 1st, but that’s another story.) She had multiple orgasms that flooded the dip in the earth the size of a standard paddling pool they stood in with her juices, her moans echoing for miles. This was the second most intense sexual experience that has ever existed, and ever will exist.

A moment had barely passed when the liquid vanished; Eve, gasping for breath, materialised next to her lover and listened, wide-mouthed as their creator spoke.
“I will now pass judgement on you.”

The strangest feeling passed through Eve’s lower body. She felt as if the after-effects of her divine ordeal were growing fainter, as if they were tangible and moving away. She looked up at her creator, and saw the look in his eyes. He spoke two words: “One tenth.”

Eve was light-headed and sobbing slightly at the thought of her future pleasure being diminished in such a way. Her punishment had not ceased, however. The same feeling that Adam had experienced minutes ago had appeared in her; the only difference that the location of this sensation was in her tits. She screamed inwardly but uttered no sound, as her tits grew shrank. Growing smaller. And smaller. When the commotion in her chest ended, they were one-eighth their original size. She was barely bigger than an A-cup. Eve mouthed two words over and over again: one word “please” and the other “no,” and Adam fell to his knees and began to sob like a small child. (Matches his dick, then.)

The next thing they knew, they were outside the garden, facing a wall that had not existed a moment previously. Adam and Eve stood there, not speaking. The two creations were dressed in loose-fitting garments made of the best wool. God was nowhere to be seen. Slowly, as the condemned would move, Adam and Eve turned and walked away from their former home, the garden of heden. Eve was still getting used to her reduced weight, so her pace was unusual.

Satan appeared on the cliff with the best view of paradise. Instead of looking at the natural beauty to her right, she stared into the direction that the two mortals had walked. God materialized behind her, and moved and embraced her.

Satan sighed. “That’s 2-1 to me, your all-mightiness,”

“Quite true, Satana, but the game is far from over. I can still make another Christ to even the score. Maybe a big-breasted woman being killed by being suspended in the air while having a dildo the size of a house shoved up her hole. (Be better than that bloody crucifix)

They stared into the distance for a time, and then God spoke again.

“Although I didn’t mention it earlier, I enjoy your new look, Satan. You’ll have to teach me how to make tits that titanic some time”

“Thank you. It’s only caused a few problems. The only differences are I have to be on top always now and I can’t do push-ups any more.

They both stared into the distance for a moment, and then God spoke again.
“Have you been able to give them a proper testing yet?” he asked casually. She smiled to herself. She could feel his stiffy growing already. (Seeing as it was trying to push her off the cliff edge.)

God was still staring out into the distance when he heard the faint, quiet sound that was associated with one of the two deity’s attire dissipating. He knew without looking that she had revealed her private glories. Her shaved, tight pussy. Her lustrous, erotic ass. He caused the sound to re-occur swiftly. He ran his hand over her navel, causing her breathing, that was unnecessary but a real turn-on, to quicken. He wasted time no longer. He rammed his cock, which would put that of a national derby horse to shame, straight up her hot, smooth and generally perfect arse. (That scorching hot piece of ass. It wasn’t actually an ass really, she had another full set of erogenous zones up there; it was really a second pussy, allowing her to come twice as often if she was ever involved in a threesome. If she had to shit, which she didn’t, constipation would have been a permanent problem, it was so tight.) While inside her faultless rear, Gods member grew and shrank in length and thickness, from 8 inches to 16, making Satan beg for more one moment, mercy the next. His fingers caressed her hot, wet, incredible pussy that was so tight you would feel resistance shoving a pencil in, and her gorgeous, fully-grown watermelons sized breasts, in ways that made her moan in ecstasy. They paused for a moment every so often, to dissolve into thin air their collective sexual juices, which were beginning to cause the land to flood. They fucked faster and faster, her orgasms growing more intense and closer together and his cock thrusts going so fast they could not be seen with the naked eye. Their skin started to develop abrasion scorching, only to heal instantly as if they had never existed. This was the most intense sexual experience that has ever existed, and ever will exist. Weeks went past, but all that mattered was the indescribable, incalculable feeling. Almost a year later they came one last time, pulled apart, spraying the ground with cum and pussy fluids, and faced each other, looking as if they had just had a good nights sleep, a full and healthy breakfast and a long, hot shower. Finally, God spoke:
“Same time next week?”

Ta....da!

It's done, you all cry, I go off and get with every female character, same old, same old...

If anyone wants an epilougue, a continuation or a one-shot, give me a review asking nicely...
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