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LET LOOSE THE SUN	By : gabby1234 Category: Twilight Series > Round Robins Views: 7547 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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“Bella tell me why you couldn’t stay away from me I’ve always wanted to know.”

Bella’s point of view:

“That’s a hard one to answer, Edward. I mean dose anyone know why there draw so deeply to someone? I guess I never really thought about it before. It was like I had to be with you; like a dark space was there if you weren’t, even from the very beginning I hoped to at least see your face everyday.” I turned to face him and pushed our bodies up against one another even further. “I know that’s probably a tame answer for what you were looking for but that’s the best I can give you.”

“Well I just initially assumed you were mental, or had no sense of self preservation”, he replied. Edward lounged unabashedly naked next to me, I loved to marvel at his body and listen to his melodic voice.

“Really for me it was part the smell, part the intrigue of your silent mind, and part the attraction I couldn’t seem to squash out. When I’ve watched other people fall in love there minds are continually obsessed with the other person, I’ve never had that before you Bella, and then when you came along I couldn’t seem to stop following you everywhere you went.”
He looked at me and flashed his shiny rainbow smile,
“Edward did you know that you still dazzle me? Years later and I still feel totally in a daze when you look at me.” He lifted my face in his hands and gave me a smoldering kiss. “You dazzle me just as much Bella, now let’s go hunt.”
“Ugh” I grunted, I was feeling so happy and lazy in Edward’s arms. But we had promised to see Charlie in a few hours. It was close to his birthday and I was very pleased with the fact that we could still included Charlie in our life. In truth I didn’t know if that was going to be possible, but he never asked too many questions, even with the way Ness was growing, he was handling it all so well. It was strange the way he had never really been in my life as a child but my, love for him just grew and grew when I moved here to Forks. By the time I married Edward I couldn’t picture fully cutting him out of my life and it was a relief to find out I didn’t have to.

“Common Bella do you want Ness throwing a fit over not seeing her grandpa?” Edward’s voice cut through my train of thought. “No I don’t think I could handle any more of those it’s crazy how bad they get I think maybe rose should put a limit on how much she gives in.”
“Well we all should really” Edward commented.
It was true our little beauty queen got everything she wanted and for the most part she wasn’t bad at all, except for when she wanted to see any family member. I think she might be going through separation issues, seems normal for her age, and then again Ness is like no other child created in the history of time. I smiled at that thought.
“As lovely and true as your thoughts are Bella, you have to remember that wee need to hunt, your eyes a almost pitch black.” Edward looked impatient to get going he must be really hungry I thought.

Edwards Point of view:

I was incredibly hungry, but the other thing pestering me was the fact that we only had a few hours left alone on our anniversary. I wanted to get this out of the way so we could get back to being alone. I loved watching Bella hunt it was extremely erotic, no matter how hard she tried she couldn’t seem to be graceful in the act of hunting. Her hair always became a mess, and blood dripped from her mouth and neck. She exuded sex and aggression. I loved to watch her hunt. I loved to touch her after a hunt. Thinking about it made me very impatient. Finally we made our way out to the forest Bella had caught herself a mountain lion this time, by stalking it a good 100 yards and then pouncing on it. She and the mountain lion wrestled on the ground for a bit, before Bella sunk her teeth into its neck. She new my favorite animal was mountain lion. It felt like she went out of her way to always look for mountain lions, like it was our special hunting game. I ate the lion with her and then it was my turn. Unlike Bella I had a more direct approach I simply struck at my prey with snake like precision, I’m not really one to wastes time playing
with food. Though in Bella’s case it’s probably her natural ability and clumsiness left over from when she was human. I can’t picture her playing with food like Emmet; simply for the sake of it, she’s more focused than that. Watching her now on the hunt, her eyes wild and her clothes heavily dirtied, it overthrew any sense of discipline I had. I wanted to taste her, to smell her, to love her.

BELLA”S POINT OF VIEW:

Edward rushed at me, he was know for acting like this on a hunt, many times we had to go alone because for the most part it ended with sex like this.
“You’re driving me insane, Bella.”
He growled; every syllable into my ear and it sent a chill down my spine, instinctually I grabbed at his torso and looped my body around his waist. He grabbed my thighs roughly and licked at the blood still running down my neck. I pulled my hair out of my face but Edward roughly grabbed at my hands and pulled them away. Replacing mine with his own, he grabbed at my hair and ran his hands through all the mess wrapping himself as tightly as he could in my hair. How could all these minor acts still feel so sexual? I let out a deep groan that came from the pit of my desire; as I ran one hand of my own in his hair, and the other at his belt, trying as fast as I could to undo the offending clothing. Edward was never know for panting like an animal during sex that was all my part, the exception of course was the hunting sex, the air around us was inflamed with the blood from our kill, our senses were on overload, and our passion was enough to wipe out all the trees in a 5 mile radius. He slammed us up against a tree effectively breaking it in half and landing us on the trunk on the ground. I rolled on top of him and quickly finished my work with his pants, this time however I didn’t want to destroy our clothes; I planned on wearing them today. Edward tore at his shirt, and slipped off my dress. We combined our mouths and breathed our air, the sweet natural tastes of both our scents mingled with the food we had consumed. Suddenly I let out a loud shriek, Edward had ran his fingers into my vagina probing all sides while rubbing my clitoris it was like an electric shock, to my pelvis. I looked down at him with a triumphant smirk on my face and lifted off of him.

EDWARD’S POINT OF VIEW:

“I love you so.” I said to her as she lifted off of me, I was so wrapped up in my oblivion that I didn’t even notice when she climbed off of me. Bella had decided to go down on me, this was something that I always had to be careful with, I never knew when to stop her because it always felt so wonderful. I lifted her torso to my face and spread open her legs laying her body on top of mine. Slowly, just to torture her I began to rub my tongue at the walls of her labia’s; with one free hand I rubbed her clitoris trying to reach an angle that would give the best pressure. Then I slowly freed my other hand from her thighs to delve my finger into her vagina. I did it so slow that it was rewarded with a groan.
“Two can play that game Edward” she teased. Bella slowed her pace and ran her tongue in a circular motion around the tip of my head; she coaxed the shaft with her fingers delicately and slowly pumping her silken skin on my shaft. She gathered extra spit around the head and sent the toxin my way. “Enough” I grunted, “your killing me.”
“Funny that’s not the phrase I would use, more like “torture to madness”, she teased.
Instead of laughing lightheartedly I grabbed at her thighs and slammed her vagina onto my face. I piously ran my tongue and hands all over her folds, I ran my tongue as deep as I could, and used my finger to pump her clitoris using all sorts of angles for pressure. Then I ran my fingers into her vagina and began to work like a machine. I was rewarded by her singing voice melodically crying out on orgasm. AAH the best song in the world, and taste was as well.

BELLA’S POINT OF VIEW:

I couldn’t help but cry out in sheer ecstasy, it helped that I allowed Edward to read my mind; when it came to oral sex he always knew exactly what to do. I grabbed his shaft and began to run it down the expanse of my throat. I hallowed my checks to get to give the same pressure he had given my vagina. And I ran my hands over his wet shaft every time my mouth came up, I too worked like a machine; mouth, hands, and smell all driving both of us over the edge and into our black hole. Then Edward pushed me off of him, I wasn’t offended because I knew what he was going for. I propped my legs on the ground and curved my back allowing his entrance smoothly into my folds. He let out a howl of pleasure when he entered my sex from behind. Then I grabbed the roots of the uprooted tree and slammed my hips back onto him, pure bliss.
“I love you, my beauty” he moaned. He began to pump harshly, slowly, painfully behind me. He ran his hand over my clitoris again, I wasn’t sure how much my body could handle; it was literally shaking from all this pleasure. He steadied me as best he could with his hands, slamming into me, to give more force, purpose and definition. We worked together running both of our sexes against each other finishing with a groan that, I’m guessing anyone could hear in a ten mile proximity. He leaned over me and kissed my back and shoulders mumbling in my ear, “For all eternity, this has to be heaven.” I smiled so brightly I knew he could see the rainbow reflect off my teeth. I got out from under him and crouched next to him on my knees.

EDWARD’S POINT OF VIEW:

“Edward this is heaven” She breathed deeply. It drove me insane to listen to those kinds of statements. Our heaven; she was mine forever, how truly lucky we were. I helped her to her feet and scooped her in my arms,

“No complaints I’m shocked Bella!”

“Edward I think I’m passed all those confused feelings about marriage; and men and woman, when it comes to you, it’s like a kingdom for a kiss, and I’ll allow any liberty you want.”
I beamed down at her and walked us home.

“A kingdom for a kiss, huh, that’s vey pretty my wife were did you hear that one?”

“In a song somewhere, I thought it applied very lovely to you. Now can you help me with this outfit? Alice is gonna have a fit, I didn’t mean to ruin it, I was so careful, and it’s all dirty now.”

“Let’s just focus on the bath for now my love; I doubt they want us coming over smelling the way we do now.” At that we both laughed. I submerged us in the water rubbing her back with the soft cloth inhaling her scent, scrubbing her hair and wiping the soap off of her beautiful face. Bella in turn ran her hands over my body and washed the dirt of my knees. It was in introspective time for us, survey the damage we had done to each other. Bella was no longer a fragile human so she no longer bruised, and so the only observed damage there really was, had been to the dress that Bella had tried to protect. We climbed out of the bath and I combed her hair and lathered her body in lotion. Rubbing all her skin I had to remind myself that we had obligations today “focus” I chided myself. We slowly walked to the main house excited to see Ness, yet sad our night was over. The seconded we saw Ness we ran to her wrapping our arms and love into her. “Mommy, Daddy, you woke everyone up this morning, what were you doing in the forest that you both were shouting so loud?”
An innocent question yet so hard to answer, Emmet let out a laugh, everyone seemed to smirk at Ness’s innocent question and looked to us for an explanation with humor in their eyes. And of course Emmet taking the bait saved us by quickly replying “They were playing baseball sweetie and your dad was probably cheating as usual.”
“Still sore about our last match Emmet” I smiled cockily at him. He turned sour in the face. “I cover your back and you act like a Judas, stab your brother in the back why don’t you Edward?” he said. But there was always a sense of joking to his statements Emmet was just too competitive for his own good. I grabbed my wife in my hands and marveled at how beautiful she was with our child.

BELLA’S POINT OF VIEW:

I did feel a little embarrassed, everyone always knew about my sex life and that would make anyone blush, I might not have all the tendencies of a new born but my sexual appetite seemed to be an exception to this. To see everyone take it so lightly was a bit odd and embarrassing, even Carslie and Esme seemed to find humor in our sex life. It felt embarrassing to have my new parents know so much about mine and Edward’s sex life. Gathering my bearing I turned to Alice;
“Well, Alice how did I do?”
“Hmm turn around for me”, she replied “Bella you are a vision in my work, if only you could do this everyday!”
“Just today” I groaned, “I’m too incompetent to do this all the time.”
I turned to Ness in my arms, “Ready for the dance my sweet?” I whispered in her ear.
“Yes, completely, mommy”, she whispered back. She put her hands to my face and showed me how she had practiced with Jacob the night before. Jacob slept peacefully on the couch his face all scrunched up and haggard, yet serene and happy. And then suddenly he was startled awake by the car approaching in the drive. Charlie I breathed, I was so happy he was here; I ran with Ness to the door and flung it open.

okay my quick note- the plot gets thicker in the chapters to come, I've decided to take this story in the direction of a continuation of what would happen in a fifth novel of the twilight series. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoy writing this!
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