Role Reversal | By : tehuti88 Category: Fairy Tales, Fables, Folklore, Legends, and Myth > Myths Views: 4231 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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AFF STORY CODES/CONTENT WARNINGS: Abuse, Angst, BDSM, Complete, D/s, H/C, Humil, M/F, M/s, OC, Oneshot, Oral, RapeFic, Rim, S&M, SH, Toys, Violence, Other (sexual activity w/ no humans involved)
STORYLINE CODE: H (set in the Horus/Kemet storyline)
TAKES PLACE DURING (specific story): NA
PAIRING: Upuat/Seii (M/F)
EXPLANATION: Please see "http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/index.php/topic/26469-explanations-disclaimers/page__view__findpost__p__250236" (copy & paste URL without quotes in address bar) for full story explanation and important author's notes! (It'll make a lot more sense if you do.)
PERSONAL DISCLAIMERS: Upuat's and Seii's very first scene together, when he refuses her attentions and is first attacked with the "stick," is not included here as it has not been written. By the time these scenes take place Upuat has already been "broken in" and plays the part of a submissive, something which does not really suit him. Perhaps someday I'll write some earlier scenes to illustrate the transition he goes through. Also, most of Seii's screaming fits stem from her rage toward Thoth. Just in case that wasn't obvious.
This scene is from circa 2003, so some details and the writing style may be out of date.
Role Reversal
Seii screamed with fury and swept the boxes and containers from her table. Everything crashed to the floor. Upuat, seated in the corner, ducked his head at the crash, ears going back.
"I loathe him!" Seii shrieked. "I despise him! How dare he keep me contained like this!"
She picked up a vase and dashed it to the floor. Upuat rose and timidly came her way. He dropped to his knees before her as she seized another one and smashed it against the wall. He whimpered but she ignored him.
"Someday I'll find out just what heka he's using," she murmured, voice deadly low. "And when I do--when I do--I'll imprison him for all eternity! Lord Thoth, the new plaything of Seii! We'll see how powerful he is then!"
She spotted an untouched vase, made to move for it--but found herself impeded. She glanced down in some irritation to see that Upuat had moved forward and wrapped his arms around her legs. He whined and pressed the side of his face against her belly, stopping her from moving.
Her first instinct was to kick him away, but his spontaneous reaction to her anger--his sudden desire to appease her, to calm her down--sparked something inside her. She hadn't even had to prompt him this time; the neter was learning. This reaction--and his submissive gesture--fueled a sudden lust within her.
"On your feet, Upuat," she ordered. "Not to my bed. We stay here. To that column. I wish for you to take me from behind, to not hold yourself back--to mount me like a bull."
He stood and obeyed, though she sensed his surprise. When she was angry, she always wished to take him, to bind him to her bed, unable to move, as she did what she wished; or else she would command him to kneel before her and mouth her while she kept his head down and in place, her stick ready should he nuzzle too hard. Through many shockings and beatings she'd had him perfect his techniques into an art. Now, though, she suddenly desired to feel him taking control, him riding her roughly. She couldn't explain it, except to believe that it was making her burn up inside. The more she thought about it, the hotter she got. Until Upuat approached her and she held up her hand, changing her mind.
"No. I've changed my mind. We do go to my bed. I will lie flat. You upon me. Take me rough, take me hard. I wish to feel you 'rape' me. Consider me your victim, for once." She smiled wickedly, and while he didn't smile back he offered no argument.
She went for her bed. He followed. On reaching it she turned to him and raised her head.
"Make this believable, Upuat. Come to me--tear at my clothes, hold me down. Bruise me. Hurt me. Think of what I have done to you. Do the same to me. If you hold back, I will give you such pain as you have never felt before! You had best make me believe you truly mean to hurt me!"
Upuat hesitated, but only for a moment. He must have believed her threat for he came forward and, reaching out, violently tore open the front of her dress, scoring the skin. Seii gasped. A second later Upuat had spun her around and pinned her flat on her stomach upon the cushions. Seii gasped again and wriggled, but her wrists were held tight. She felt the wolf god tear open her dress to bare her buttocks. One knee pressed down on her left thigh to keep her from moving; the other forced her legs apart.
Seii laughed breathlessly. "Good, good, Lord Upuat! You are a natural at this! See how well I've taught you? Don't hesitate now, though, or you will regret it later!"
She heard him snort, then he came down over her, breath fanning on her ear, their bodies close. She dropped her head and moaned and Upuat thrust within her savagely, member seeming to tear through the core of her being. She tried to arch, felt him keep her down--hips on both sides of her--only following her command as he started plunging forward and in, forward and in, growling heatedly as he did so.
She didn't know if he enjoyed it or not, but she felt a brief surge of satisfaction that he'd learned so quickly. How well her efforts at beating the noble neter into submission had gone! So that he could now be the dominant one, for an interesting change of pace!
He went quickly, his grasp bruising her wrists, the weight of his body crushing her into the bed; she'd never realized until now just how much bigger and stronger he was, physically, than she. The realization would have frightened her had she not had her stick.
She suddenly realized now that she didn't have it. It had fallen to the bed, just beyond her reach. Upuat himself could grasp it if he wanted to! Suddenly afraid, she writhed and tried to reach for it, but couldn't, not with the god's weight keeping her down. He growled at her motions, pressed her down tighter--she quailed inside, then remembered that he was doing only as she'd commanded, making it believable. Still, she wanted her stick before he got any ideas; as he continued pushing at her she reached her hands closer to the stick until she managed to at least grasp hold of it. A wave of relief passed over her.
To her surprise, she heard Upuat yelp, felt him spurt inside her abruptly, his seed releasing. She convulsed herself, his spontaneous orgasm bringing her to climax. She could only guess that the sight of her wielding the stick had caught him so offguard that he couldn't control himself. His weight left her, leaving her gasping; she rolled over onto her back to see him duck from the bed, bowing his head low, ears going back again in that submissive gesture. His member still stood erect, a last short spurt of his seed dampening the floor in front of him; as it shrank back down between his legs he too appeared to shrink, touching his head to the floor and whining plaintively.
Seii sighed. Well, that had ended a little abruptly.
She pushed herself to her feet, hanging the stick on her belt. One hand wiped away a bit of blood trickling down her scored skin. "Come, Upuat. I'm disappointed in you. I'll give you one more chance to redeem yourself this night. You know what to do."
The wolf god stood, keeping his head bowed, and moved to the bed. As soon as he lay down Seii waved her hand and shackles appeared, closing around his wrists and ankles. He said nothing, though his look bordered on miserable. She knew that the shackles were unnecessary--he would be still and submit to anything she desired--yet their presence stimulated her. She enjoyed making the foreign neter her pleasure slave.
She proved this by riding atop him for a while, her hips bucking, once in a while dismounting and moving up to his face to let him mouth her. Her bed shook as she rode hard, the feet cracking against the floor when she came, and he came with her. She took him twice this way, the second time more violently than the last, and still was not sated. The heat burned within her greater than ever.
She climbed off of the panting exhausted god, a thin strand of his semen trailing down her leg as she did so. She bent to take the tip of his member in her mouth for a moment, savoring the taste, hearing him bite off a whine when she bit at him. She could tell that he was worn out, almost completely spent; but there had been nights when she'd forced him to perform even longer than this. Another long night here or there wouldn't hurt him any.
"I'm still angry with you, dear Upuat. To fail me the first time, and then to perform so poorly the next two. You can do much better than this, surely. Do you have any excuse?"
Once again he said nothing, just turned his head aside, ears flattening.
She pulled out the stick and struck at him, the thin tip slicing the skin on his belly. He let out a small pained yip and jerked.
"You must answer me this time! I command you to speak, vile dog! What is your excuse tonight?"
Ears still flat, eyes narrowed almost shut. She rarely commanded him to speak, but she knew that he disliked it when she did, as she almost always disliked what he had to say. Still, he had to learn. When he did speak his voice came out weak and timid, nothing like the vicious snarls he'd tossed at her when she'd first forced him to couple with her. "I...my excuse is not learning enough from your discipline, noble Goddess."
She raised the stick to hit him again before realizing what he'd said. Had he actually said that? She lowered the stick, seeing him timidly open one eye to gauge her reaction to his words. She ran it along the palm of one hand while she considered his treatment.
"Well," she finally murmured. "Perhaps you are learning, after all, pretty dog. You realize who your mistress is?"
"Yes, noble Goddess."
"Who is she?"
"You, noble One."
"What does your mistress desire, Lord Upuat?"
"Obedience, Mistress."
"From whom?"
"From this vile dog. From Upuat."
"Will the noble Upuat bother to obey his mistress, now and always?"
"Yes, Mistress. Always." His ears flattened again, as if realizing he'd made some kind of mistake. "Lord Upuat is not a noble one like his mistress. He is a vile foreign dog, worthy of her contempt."
She hadn't even caught the mistake until he pointed it out. She smiled.
"Very keen of you, Upuat. Instead of reviling you, foreign dog that you are, what do I, your noble goddess, do for you?"
"My mistress teaches me. Disciplines me. She makes me her loyal dog."
Such interesting responses! She should have gotten him to talk more often. "This is most correct, pretty Upuat...you are my loyal little dog. Do I punish you for this?"
"No, Mistress. You treat me as your loyal dog, discipline me when I am wrong, reward me when I am right."
"When are you 'right'?"
"When my mistress makes love to me." He fell silent, ears flattening once more as if he'd said too much.
"So...this is what I do, is it? Make love to you, foreign dog?"
"I...n...no, Mistress...I speak out of line. Forgive me."
She waved her hand. "Nonsense. You speak the truth, for once. But you get your facts mixed up. I discipline you when you need to learn. I discipline you further when you are right. However, if you choose to look upon the latter as...'making love,' then who am I to stop you."
"You are my mistress, I am your loyal contemptible dog."
She waved again and the shackles disappeared. "I wasn't searching for a response to that, loyal Upuat. Though I know you only try. Get up. Your mistress decides to be lenient tonight. One more try for you, Upuat. Only one."
The wolf god sat up slowly, rubbing his wrists and keeping his ears low. "My mistress is too kind...this vile dog does not deserve her leniency."
"This is true. However, if you please me this time, then you should deserve what you get. Follow me."
He got up and followed her. She approached the table that she'd cleared of its contents, waving him over when he almost hesitated.
"Here. Take me here. Once more, we'll try it as we did before--you in command--and this time I shall keep my stick nearby just in case--but you will be the one to take me, do you understand?"
He said nothing.
"Prove that you're my loyal little dog," Seii commanded. "Take me the way a dog would. Here, atop here." She climbed atop the table, knowing that it could support both their weight. "Come up now, Upuat. Prove to me what a loyal little dog you are. Take your mistress, the way a dog would. This is only fitting for your kind, is it not?"
When he didn't reply again she summoned him impatiently; "Come!" and he climbed up atop the table, joining her. She pulled the torn part of her dress aside before deciding to do away with it altogether, stripping it off and setting her stick below her. Her breasts swung free and she straddled the table, hips poised high. "Hurry up, now, Upuat, follow your mistress's example and do away with that which you don't need. Then prove to me what a loyal dog you are!"
He quickly removed his clothing; despite the time they'd been together she'd never seen him completely naked. The sight aroused her. The gray fur lining his head and face stopped just at his neck, where his body became that of a man--but that of a strong, virile man. His broad shoulders, tight muscles, and the dark curly hair ringing his penis excited her. Panting, she turned away, gripping the edges of the table, arching so her buttocks parted. "Lick me first, Upuat, make certain your mistress is prepared for your entry!"
His tongue, long and warm, flicked over her, inside both her vagina and anus. Seii moaned. This technique he had perfected as well. Once she had been sufficiently dampened she suddenly felt his hips pressing against hers, hair tickling her skin. From above her head came the wolf god's rapid pant. His arms he placed on both sides of her; his skin was warm against her back. For a moment he was still, then he started bumping his hips forward at her, as if making love to her already, yet he didn't enter her. She paused with some surprise before realizing that he was not hard yet; he must be attempting to prepare himself, as if the motion would excite him enough to copulate with her. After a moment of this, it appeared to do the trick; she felt him swelling, hardening, and her breath--and his--quickened. She growled slightly, wriggling her hips; Upuat bumped his own at her and his member, hard and thick, penetrated her. Only a moment later he was pushing rapidly, hips pumping, growling low and lustily in his throat. Seii felt indeed as if it were a large dog and not a noble neter who coupled with her, for the look on his lupine face and the sounds that he made. She whined in turn, submitted to him; when he growled she growled, and it appeared to excite him, to her immense pleasure, and he indeed took her the way a dog takes his bitch.
She spoke to him, voice husky, as they moved. "Noble Lord Upuat...what say you...loyal dog of mine...what say you of this most immense honor, the honor your mistress bestows upon you? To allow you to couple with me? You, mere vile dog, taking your most noble mistress as you would your mate...what do you say of this honor I grant you? Speak up...speak up, loyal dog...tell me what you think."
Upuat answered only with a feral growl. His hips pushed roughly, incessantly.
She let out a breathless laugh. "This is all the loyal dog has to say to his mistress? To speak as a dog would? This is fitting then...oh...the dog knows his place after all. If you had dared to speak and think yourself above me...oh..." she shivered in pleasure "...then it would have been pain for you, and the great displeasure of your mistress...would you have wished for this, little dog? I doubt--oh--doubt it...keep it up...keep it up, loyal dog...oh..." above her, Upuat began grunting as he pushed "...take me...just like that...now you're learning...oh...despite what you are...vile foreign dog...you do feel good inside me...oh...yes...this not-so-little dog brings his mistress much pleasure, indeed...oh...yes...that's it...keep it up...that's it...that's it...deeper...deeper, dog...more...more...ah!...more...deeper...faster...deeper...deeper...deeper, dog!...DEEPER!...DEEPER!...COME INSIDE ME, DOG!...INSIDE YOUR MISTRESS--DEEPER--MORE--MORE--MORE--MORE!!--NOW--!!"
She broke off with a hoarse cry. Upuat's frenzied grunting broke off with a shattering howl. His hips pushed hard at hers, one final time; she welcomed his seed this time, the hot healthy spurt, deep within her; when she leaned over panting and he pulled out from her she nodded almost to herself, almost unable to speak, not having yet caught her breath. Upuat said nothing, only panted in turn, waiting for her word.
Seii turned her head to him, nodding exhaustedly, managing a sort of smile. "Yes...loyal little dog...you've finally managed to please your mistress for tonight...come...back to my bed...we shall lie together, and if your mistress wishes she shall take you again, but if you behave well she may allow you some rest to recover yourself, loyal dog. Is this good?"
Flattened ears, subjugated look of respect. "This vile dog does not deserve his mistress's kindness...still, he will do what he can to please her."
Seii smiled, spent and satisfied. Yes...he was definitely learning. Most definitely.
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