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Reviews for Consequences

By : Sabriel0405
  • From ANON - TaichiKoi on August 29, 2004
    Wow, it felt like I was reading the actually novel. I luved every moment of this fic. I hope you continue to write more AB fics and any other fics of your choosing. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Kiri on August 17, 2004
    I will try this a second time. Last time my computer went all wonky on me.
    I just finishe reading Consequences. Wow!!
    You gently wove together characters, events and emotion in a gripping tale. Your story evoked true emotion. It was poignant and touching without venturing into the ridiculous or melodramatic.
    Well done!
    I hope to read more from you in the future.
    Thanks for a good read.

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  • From ANON - lalaland on August 15, 2004
    It was a very wondeful story. Excellent ending, excellent flow, believable, etc, etc. Wonderful.
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  • From ANON - BethanyW on August 11, 2004
    Hey well I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading your fiction! It was so good it could have been an actual Anita Blake novel! Only without the big monster bad guy! You're really talented! Beth.
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  • From ANON - Kel on August 11, 2004
    Wow...just wow. I have really loved reading your story and I'm kind of sad to see it end. I was mad at first when you had Anita loose the baby, but you really got the story back on track quickly with deep thoughts and moving scenes. Anita was very much in character and I loved the demension you added to the secondary characters. All in all I absolutely loved this fanfic and you did a wonderful job writing it!
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  • From ANON - Johanna on August 10, 2004
    Oh...my....God. Awesome. I can't believe it's done. Dammit. So very, very good. Exactly correct.
    Not altogether perfect, but if you ever want to write more, I'd be glad to buy it from you.
    Or if you ever need like, um, anything at all, ask......just because you're awesome. Wow. Nice.
    I love the ending, I love Micah's words, I love Anita's realizations, I love it all.
    Yummy sex, gut-clenching twists, laughter and tears. What more could I want?
    Thanks, I'm well satiated. You rock. I think I'll last till Incubus Dreams now...only a month and a half.
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  • From ANON - Nanz on August 10, 2004
    A wonderful well written story.
    I look forward to your next effort.
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  • From ANON - Johanna on August 10, 2004
    Sorry, my computer went insane. I just wanted to thank you for brightening large portions of my life.
    I love your grasp of Anita’s character.And what everyone’s said to her….perfect. Thanks for letting Richard be as I always hoped Richaouldould be. I knew there was reason to hope. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Johanna on August 10, 2004
    Wow. I actually cried. Those were exactly Anita's last words....even if they weren't really her last.
    So, so so good. I never cry, and you made me. The character development is incredibly talented.
    The gifts were wonderful, the twists stunning and breathtaking,
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  • From ANON - Nanz on August 08, 2004
    I hope Anita will recover soon.
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  • From ANON - Nanz on August 06, 2004
    That was beautifully written.
    I don't know what else to say.
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  • From ANON - Rachelie on August 06, 2004
    I absolutely love your story. I think your characters are dead-on and the plot is intrigueing. I almost cried in the last chapter! Please keep up the excellent writing!
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  • From ANON - Trisha on August 05, 2004
    Awwww she can't loose the baby, not after all the cute baby gifts she got for Christmas!! You are so cruel if Baby Blake is poofed, gone... *Sobs*


    Great story though, besides the baby is dead part. I've been reading since Chapter 1, you got me hooked!

    Write more soon, please!!
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  • From ANON - Nanz on August 05, 2004
    They found her. Great.
    But she lost the baby. That's awful.
    More soon please.
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  • From ANON - cyri on August 05, 2004
    This is one of the best please more.......
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