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Reviews for Consequences

By : Sabriel0405
  • From ANON - Maggie on August 05, 2004
    She lost the baby. That's so sad. It made me want to cry. Your story is really good so far. Please continue, every time I find a good Anita fanfic the author seems to forget about it.
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  • From ANON - Tre on August 04, 2004
    oh man, that sucks...not the writing, what happened. you write very well and very true to character. I hope you write more, I am curious about how Richard is going to take everything.
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  • From ANON - Nanz on August 04, 2004
    Oh no.
    Is she loosing the baby?
    I really don't want that to happen.
    You must come back soon.
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  • From ANON - Nanz on August 03, 2004
    That was beautiful and very warming.
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  • From ANON - Sandi on August 03, 2004
    Thank you for chapter 13! You brought Anita, Jean-Claude and Asher together in a wonderful way.

    I check each day for the updates to your story, I feel like it's my birthday when I see a new chapter poster.
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  • From ANON - Nanz on July 30, 2004
    That went better than I thought it would.
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  • From ANON - Sandi on July 24, 2004
    I love the new chapter. I'm glad you added Damien to the chapter. I hope we see more of him later. I can't wait for new chapters. I am very caught up in the story.
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  • From ANON - Nanz on July 24, 2004
    Oh my.
    Anitia has so many men so little time.
    Lucky girl, even with an unexpected pregnancy.
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  • From ANON - Nanz on July 22, 2004
    That went okay now what?
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  • From ANON - Eve B Hart on July 22, 2004
    Yay! You included Violet! That makes me happy, since everyone else seems to forget her. I'm sorry I didn't review this before, but I've been having to read-and-go these days. But know that I have loved this from the beginning, and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Johanna on July 21, 2004
    If anita's been taking the pill regularly since the days that she missed, with Jason, then isn't the baby going to be hurt?
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  • From ANON - Kel on July 20, 2004
    Ooooooooh, I LOVE this story! You're keeping everybody in character wonderfully and I like that your story is still realistic. Great job and please update VERY soon!
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  • From ANON - Johanna on July 20, 2004
    yay! A new chapter. And wow, WHAT a chapter it was.
    Don't let rough sex hurt the baby, dear. Of course,
    Anita has that preternatural strength, I'm sure the
    little girl will be fine. More soon, please!
    And I love that so many love this baby. What
    a lucky baby it is. Good Job, and keep going!
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  • From ANON - lalaland on July 20, 2004
    YAY!! JC SEX!! MICAH SEX!! well, actually kind of a JC/Anita/Micah sandwich. I think that's the first threesome with those characters I've ever read. Way to go!! It was GREAT.
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  • From ANON - Reesa on July 20, 2004
    Very interesting. I always wondered what Anita would do if pregnate. I did find myself drifting a couple of times, but then I have ds rds running around. Will there be a new monster or situation for this story? I assume so, since there has been 2 murders in town. Please let me know when you have more posted. If you need a beta let me know, although I didn't catch hinghing while I was reading.
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