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Reviews for Kushiel's Pupil

By : Seraphis
  • From Esphyr on December 12, 2018

    I have loved this series of Fanfic for years. I just found the last two chapters here after being stuck with slightly less on non adult fanfiction. Years after the last update and I wish there was so much more. Come back Seraphis! This story makes me happy.


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  • From ANON - purplefuzz on September 06, 2010
    This is a beautifully written story, and a wonderful tribute to Jacqueline Carey's characters and stories. The pace is slow and deliberate, but not ponderous - very much like the originals. You have obviously put a lot of time, effort and love into this - keep it up!
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  • From ANON - mistedly on August 30, 2010
    Actually, I like Ana and I like Barquiel, so I didn't think this was slow-moving. That is the one thing I love the best with this story - it takes time to build up Ana's character. She is interesting because you make her so, not because she's the daughter of Phèdre and Joscelin.

    I liked this chapter a lot - Barquiel was abrasive and rough - he doesn't like Phèdre - but not overly so, since he's dealing wth a kid. Hm. Maybe because he's dealing with a girl =)

    Glad that you are still writing!



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  • From ANON - ContessaNatasha on April 12, 2010
    This is wonderful. I am so very glad you have decided to continue, as I was slightly concerned.



    I am curious to see what all these young folk are like once they grow up a bit. As well, I am pleased to encounter Hyacinth.
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  • From ANON - mistedly on April 11, 2010
    Thank you for the update!

    I liked when Ana betrayed her heritage and waxed (almost) poetic about a wellconstructed Roman bridge rather than flowers. ;) And I liked the description of Hyacinthe. And the Alban pastries.

    Your story flows very well, and the dialogue is in character.
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  • From TypeOneg on December 29, 2009
    Hi, I really like this story and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Its very well written and engaging.
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  • From antumbra on October 20, 2009
    I don't think I've ever been quite so enthralled with a piece of fanfiction. Superb! You captured Carey's voice so amazingly. Please, please, please write more!
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  • From ANON - paradoxangel on October 09, 2009
    Beautiful. Write me more??
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  • From ANON - Amanda on October 09, 2009
    This is beautifully written. I admit I was weary of the idea of Joscelin and Phèdre having a child as Phedre states she'd never ask Joscelin to further compromise his honor in such a way, but you have managed it magnificently. In truth I think its a possibility all the fans crave and your tale is greatly satisfying. I simply can't wait for the rest of your story. I've come to love your characters as much as Jacqueline's and you write Jacqueline's characters and world in a way I think does them justice.
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  • From ANON - Mistedly on September 26, 2009
    Thanks for the update! I hoped that you wouldn't give up on the story, and I am so glad you didn't. Still one of the best book-fics I've read.
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  • From ANON - Allison on August 11, 2009
    Yay--please update soon, I'm looking forward to some SMUT!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie keller on August 03, 2009
    I just wanted to state the pure joy I have had reading this story thus far. I was reading Kushiel's Dart when I started this nad your work is on par and very compatable with Ms. Carey's work and I Applaude you. I greatly look forward to new chapters.
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  • From ANON - Maia on August 01, 2009
    I'm enjoying this very much indeed. Some very neat dovetailing with the original - particularly impressed with the background on Cassiel. Would love to read more.
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  • From ANON - mistedly on June 15, 2009
    I'm so glad you updated! This was the perfect midsummer present. =) Kushiel's pupil is my favourite unfinished fanfic, and I have been pretty despondent, thinking that you have given it up.

    I really like how Ana is changing - I love the idea of Ana being more interested in engineering and swordplay than covertcy. Instead of being a retread of the books, it feels perfectly new to me, since Ana's interests and outlook on life is so different from Phedre's and Imriel's.

    I really like Taurus, and the new male characters you introduced in the last two chapters were interesting as well. It's going to be very interesting when Ana grows old enough for boys (and duelling =).

    I love how your story unfolds slowly - most fanfic authors write vignettes, hoping to get to the parts they and their readers find most interesting. That works for mind candy, but I find that all fanfic stories that I treasure and reread are stories that took it slowly and built up the scene, which made the emotional impact much, much better.


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  • From ANON - ContessaNatasha on June 04, 2009
    Thank you so much for updating! I am really enjoying your characterization of Ana. It is rare than an original character is so well thought out, and un-cliched. Phedre and Joscelin are also very well written, which shows wondrous talent on your part.
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