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Reviews for Heaven's Done Falling

By : caughtinthestorm
  • From WildEyes on May 17, 2008
    Hey! Love your story, it's so realistic. Please update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on May 12, 2008
    I love this story,I was wondering if you were going to continue to write it?I have to know what becomes of them,do they have a boy a girl what?I think you should finish this story.We need atleast another 10 chapters.haha Please!!!!!!!

    Thank You;Jessica
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  • From ANON - Hilary on April 21, 2008
    You really, REALLY need to continue this, ASAP. I know you must be busy, but I would really be grateful if you did. It was great.
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  • From ANON - Jenna Holmes on April 20, 2008
    I hevenly swear this is the best Twilight story i have ever read and i hope its not over. mabye a little more ups and downs. Who knows?


    Jenna.::.Riot
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  • From ANON - Ashley on April 04, 2008
    can we say update? I wanna know what happppens
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  • From Ehlwyne26 on April 03, 2008
    *Review Repost*
    (I realized I wasn't logged in when I made my review... sorry :D)

    I fell in love with your story!

    Though the topic of Bella getting impregnated is a popular base for many fanfic's, you broached the subject from a different point of view, (that vampire's can in fact have children,) making the story all your own.
    Chapters 2 and 4 are absolutely amazing, for reasons I'm sure you know, but it wasn't just the erotic scenes that made them work. It was how you made them so intimate as well. Edward's concern for Bella is extremely predominate, like Stephanie portrays it in her books.
    The relationship you have going in the first couple of chapters, between Edward and Emmett, makes me laugh every time I read it. The way they raze each other is truly comical and factual. (I have a bunch of older brothers and see that sort of thing a lot.)
    I’m still unsure about how you portrayed Bella’s feelings on her having a baby. I always pictured her, if the event does actually happen in Breaking Dawn, to be a little more jubilant about it. Although I see where you’re coming from with her feelings of uneasiness and doubt, I would have figured her to react differently to Edward’s suggestions to alternate options, focusing more on the fact that it was her and Edward’s child and not on the fact that she would feel bad about getting rid of it.
    Maybe I feel as though that fact wasn’t stressed enough, but that’s just my opinion.
    I must say that I was a little heart broken that the story seemed to be over, seeing as it hasn't been updated since the 27th of December, and I'm just curious if you intent to write a follow up story about the pregnancy and child rearing, or are you just going to leave it at that.
    I truly hope that you decide to continue your story; you are an amazingly gifted writer.
    I was also wondering if you could post a link to you other stories, on fanfiction.net or any other sites you post to, I attempted to search for you but came up short.

    Best of luck with your future writings!
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  • From ANON - hmmm on March 30, 2008
    I love it. Please wright more soon. Your a talented wrighter!!! ^^
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  • From butabara on March 21, 2008
    *tear* how sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!
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  • From ShadowStar666 on March 12, 2008
    this story is beautiful. it is as if i am reading the 4th book already. really I can't wait until you add more. ^_^ so happy!!! ^_^
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on March 03, 2008
    this is such a brilliant fic! i cant wait for more!
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  • From DracoGinnyLover24 on February 23, 2008
    This is a really good story so far and I can't wait to read more! :)
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  • From CaressingCrescendo on February 19, 2008
    I am loving this fic so far. It's the first I've found that is believable outside of the original series. I cannot wait to read more.

    JLB
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2008
    your story is so good please update it soon I want to know what happens!
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  • From ANON - Ara on February 10, 2008
    Awesome story! Keep it coming! I gotta see the little one! You rock!
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  • From mopple on February 01, 2008
    omg i am so totally obsessed with this story, it goes on doesn't it???? this story is my opium I NEED IT!!! MORE! MORE!
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