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Reviews for The Black Holiday

By : Renee1985
  • From on March 26, 2009
    Wow, that was really good. You had me on the edge of my seat and almost crying... I felt so bad for Bella, Edward too of course, but he's the one that tends to overreact. Anyway, great update!! can't wait for the next.
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  • From Kim620 on March 26, 2009
    What a bitch!!!! I think they should all put Rose in her place. Thankfully nothing happened. Poor Edward and Bella. :(
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  • From Kim620 on March 26, 2009
    Well shit....I didn't see that coming. Shame an Alice for not making sure Bella got in touch with Edward. Please tell me that Mike was actually decent. And was the really Rose?
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  • From insatiable06 on March 25, 2009
    Thank you for the update, really enjoyed it. It seems to skip a bit, and OMG she's pregnant! LOL... sorry!
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  • From Kim620 on March 25, 2009
    I am saddened that you chose to have Bella pregnant so soon but at least Edward smiles at the idea. Maybe it's a false positive? :D
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  • From on March 25, 2009
    Really good chapter!! Can't wait for the next one
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  • From Kim620 on March 22, 2009
    I felt a little bad for Edward when he had to eat his birthday dinner all alone, :). I would say after 4 months that he has proved himself to be a gentleman. :D Nice to see their first time lasted 3 days, LOL.

    I am curious why you chose to change Edward's birthdate? In case you didn't know....according to SM it's June 20th.
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  • From on March 22, 2009
    Great chapter, hope you write more soon.
    BTW, Edward's birthday is June 20.
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  • From Kim620 on March 20, 2009
    That was a perfect first date for them. Well done. I am glad she told he why she left in the morning.
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  • From on March 20, 2009
    I loved that chapter!! Anything that has the two of them coupling in any way I love. Especially the line, "Your hold is permanent and unbreakable", EXCELLENT line!!! Fantastic writing!!!
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  • From Kim620 on March 19, 2009
    Boy when these finally start asking their questions they are going to explode, LOL. They need to be answered though. I hope the next chapter will get them some answers. I especially want Bella to let Edward know why she leaves in the morning.
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  • From insatiable06 on March 19, 2009
    Very nice, I am glad they both have the same questions. :) can't wait for the update ;) Date night should be good!
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  • From on March 19, 2009
    Excellent chapter!!! Can't wait to see what happens. Thank you as well for all of your reviews!!!
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  • From on March 14, 2009
    Aww... That was so sweet and romantic. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From Kim620 on March 14, 2009
    Yeah. I am so glad they talked it out. Sweet sweet chapter.
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