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Reviews for The Black Holiday

By : Renee1985
  • From insatiable06 on March 14, 2009
    Ch 7 is really hard to read and pay attention to . the whole "ÒBella,Ó" thing is annoying. Whats going on with it?why are those O's every where?
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  • From on March 12, 2009
    Very nice chapter. I like how you have them both so desperate but at the same time holding back, it really helps to show how much they truly desire each other, and not just lust desire, but real desire to be with each other. I can't wait to see where you take this.
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  • From insatiable06 on March 11, 2009
    this was a great chapter, but she sure is mad now lol who could blame the girl.

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  • From insatiable06 on March 11, 2009
    Getting better. :) this was a great chapter thank you!
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  • From on March 11, 2009
    It's really, really good so far. I can get the idea of what you're trying to say and definitely of what you're trying to convey to the readers through the characters. Like you said, just the spelling errors. Do you have a beta???
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  • From Roseann1013 on March 10, 2009
    I like this story.
    Very good begining.
    Captivating.
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  • From insatiable06 on March 10, 2009
    I think it's starting out good, kind of short chapters. Lots of spelling errors and hard to read at times. Most people use quotations when people are talking and italics when they are thinking, so thats hard to decipher until I got used to it. I do like the story tho and hope you continue.
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