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Reviews for Just Breathe

By : SamanthLeopard
  • From AlannaKisume on July 07, 2009
    wow this is good so far i like it, i hope you continue writing this
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  • From LaMariposa3795 on June 17, 2009
    wow....great job so far...I hope you continue!!
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  • From VanillaToast on April 25, 2009
    Wow... Just... Wow. I'm a huge Jacob fan and felt that he just didn't get the love he deserved. :( I'd love to read more and I think that you stick with Bella's personality excellently.

    TEAM JACOB!
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  • From Blahsblah2001 on March 14, 2009
    Nice. My only suggestion would be to re-write the quoted parts, it's your story, take charge! There's one place where you have 'we' instead of 'he,' but other than that grammar and spelling look a-ok. Now my only problem is gonna be keeping 'Just Breathe' and 'Breathe Again' separate in my head!
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