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Reviews for Jacob

By : EvaBrick
  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2009
    YOU MAKE ME SAD! FINISH THE STORY.
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  • From ANON - Jen on November 23, 2009
    Please continue this story. Please. It's a good read, smart and not teeny and oh yeah I really prefer these two rather than Bella and Edward. Props to you for having her gain a brain and realize she needed some time to think before making decisions. One of the things I dislike about the character is the melodrama and lack of thinking she does at times. Good for you for improving her. So... please continue... please?
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  • From ANON - LiLi on July 21, 2009
    Awesome Story!!
    Can't wait for the next bit!!
    PLEASE!!! Update soon!!
    PlEase :P
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  • From ANON - natasha on July 14, 2009
    p p p p p pllllllease update u ppl really like makin me cry lol
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  • From ANON - bethie26 on June 25, 2009
    I really like your story so far, could you please post some more soon? I'll be checking! I
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  • From ANON - Renae on June 19, 2009
    LOVE IT! NEEDS SOME SMUT!!! This is ADULT FANFICTION afterall. lol. But otherwise it's fantastic!
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  • From LaMariposa3795 on June 16, 2009
    AW!! Jacob seems scared to feel for her again....she should totally go to the pow wow....after all, Jacob WANTS her to...you can tell...heeheeheehee!! Great job on this story so far, and I REALLY loved the reasons that Jacob gave to Bella in the first chapter, on why NOT to become the undead....they were sooooo true and really gives you something to think about when romanticizing vampires too much.....
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  • From InfernalParadise on June 15, 2009
    Wolves in the backyard for safety and big pow-wow instead of a prom (now honestly, isn't every prom but a big pow-wow??)? Yummy!
    But... Bert?? That guy sounds like some big fluffy monster from some children's TV series. *lol* Hope Bella will decide to leave Bert be and dedicate her attention fully on Jacob (if you know what I mean...). ;)
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  • From caliha on June 14, 2009
    great story! thanks for sharing
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  • From BeautifulOblivion on June 13, 2009
    That cliffy was just evil now. What on Earth is Jacob thinking? Update very soon. Gah! Come on now, you know you want to tell us what he's thinking. Pretty please.
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  • From ANON - DeeLish on June 06, 2009
    Interesting little story so far, i do hope you update this soon...and longer chapters would be fab!!!

    DeeLish xx
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  • From Recordkeeper on June 06, 2009
    THANK YOU GOD IN HEAVEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! someone who finally realizes what an idiot bella was being about the whole thing. Man thats exactly why i hated the books. thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this. people need to understand the truth.
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  • From ANON - miss otherworld on June 04, 2009
    ooo i like. i like alot
    its good how your making jake seem at least a little reluctant and not just jumping straight into the
    'oh bella, now your back from leaving me for months i love you and ill forget all the shit thats happened'
    :D
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  • From Sekhmet on June 03, 2009
    I am sure I will love this as soon as Jecob forgives Bella....so update soon please?
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  • From spotted3star on June 02, 2009
    nicely done i'm waiting for more =3
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