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  • From elvinwitch on October 08, 2009
    That was a twist. It's hard to imagine Edward not being obsessed with Bella. What could Witaker's deep dark secret be? I think it involves vampires but then that would be your call now wouldn't it. Can't wait to read what will happen.
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  • From InfernalParadise on October 04, 2009
    Oh God, I’m down with a cold and some silly fever, but this chapter made me smile despite all my suffering. ^_^
    I’m glad they finally reconciled again… and especially that they made out again. ;) Smut in the woods is just great to read.

    I’ll take a bold guess and say it’s Edward. Shocked? Yeah, me too! *lol* But after all, Edward’s behavior during the past chapters has been rather… strange, and I’ve started wondering if he may have feelings for Whitaker as well. Again, it’s just a bold guess. I assume it’d have to be another vampire since they’d both surely heard a beating heart had it been some human. That’s why it can’t be any of the wolf guys like Jacob, either (because of the smell).

    “I'm not sure the producers of the channels would let us on so easily... Unless you know some people, of course.” – Are you kidding?? I know Emmett. If they don’t roll out the red carpet for us and offer us a big show at prime time, then we’ll send Emmett over to “convince” them. We could also send Jasper along to manipulate their emotions towards us. And if all of that’s no help, then we’ll simply send Rosalie over to get on everyone’s nerves until they’ll surrender voluntarily. Hehe.
    It must be the fever that makes me extra stupid today… ;P
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  • From ANON - Kiki on October 03, 2009
    Hi I would say that it’s Edward, he is a little strange in this story and I think it would make sense. Uhh and this chapter was hot ;-)
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  • From elvinwitch on October 01, 2009
    Wow thats just kinda scary don't know how i would feel with someone watching me. I'm kinda curious exactly what Jasper was brooding about all the time. I know you talked about it some maybe i just didn't get it all.
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  • From Songoftime on October 01, 2009
    That squirrel's a spy!
    I'm glad to see Jasper's done brooding. He tends to read too much into things.
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  • From KathrynH on September 30, 2009
    I think it was Bella! maybe... and that's why Edwards been so pissed, cuz she smells all aroused imagining Whit and Jas together, making it harder for him to resist her. If it was her, he's gonna be in for it tonight! Or I could be completely wrong and it was jealous Edward. *shrugs*

    Yay, I'm glad I make you laugh, it's good to have a purpose in life, lol. And you know damn well I haven't forgotten about promises for a 'Music' smuttake! Hell, any smuttake for that matter..hehe.

    @ G of M - *pouting* What if I can't find a Cullen to bring? They seem to scatter when I get near... muttering phrases like 'cougar' even though they are technically waaayyyy older than I. *pouts again*
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 30, 2009
    Finally, when I had almost given up hope, there’s one more reason to dislike Mike. Life really is beautiful. ;) How do you do that, making each chapter have a new idea of entertaining me in unexpected but very pleasant ways?? You’re awesome. O.O

    You know, Edward’s just a weirdo. He probably didn’t take his pills that morning. I wouldn’t worry too much about him anyway. Could as well be that Bella locked the bedroom door and he hasn’t gotten any “action” lately. Hehe.

    And what’s that? “I really think "The Jellyfish of Doom Show" would be #1 most-watched on YouTube!”?? On youtube?? Honey, I’m not talking about pathetic youtube here (sorry, youtube, don’t take it personally!), but about ALL those huge TV channels… oh, did I already mention that Edward’s not the only one who didn’t take his pills today?? *lol*
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  • From Songoftime on September 28, 2009
    Edward sure is moody. I understand being defensive, but he could at least try to understand the situation before getting aggressive. Mike's acting out of line though. In a relationship or not, you don't just randomly kiss someone you're not in a relationship with without some sort of mutual understanding. Mike's looking like a more selfish character in this chapter. I thought he was nicer than that.
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  • From ANON - Kiki on September 27, 2009
    Great chapter, I like where you’re taking the story. I also think that it is great that you made Whitaker so daring and so fearless, but still it shows that inside he is not really that sure of himself. Oh and I love that Whitakers nickname for Jasper, Treasure it shows how he really feels in just one word. I’m still loving the story :-)
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  • From KathrynH on September 25, 2009
    Oh I almost forgot to answer this chapter's query. If he's 'treasure', does that mean that when he's the top he becomes buried treasure?? hehehe, sorry couldn't resist. I love it by the way.
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  • From KathrynH on September 25, 2009
    mmhmmf sdg fke jfmmmgnr *sips milk then wipes away brownie crumbs* Ah, better. As I was saying, Thanks for the brownies! (I'm not gonna get the munchies in a bit am I? 'Cuz that would cause a viscious cycle to begin, eating more brownies for the munchies and so on) And I even came (pardon the pun) close to the correct answer! Applause for brave Whitaker as well, kinda like submissive Jaz.
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  • From InfernalParadise on September 25, 2009
    Hun, obviously, we are ALL psychic! *lol* Must be the stories on this site or something... or could it be that Jasper's screwing around with my mind again?? Bad Jasper. No blood cookie for Jasper (reminds me... does anyone remember the scene from "Buffy" where Spike put Weetabix into his blood to make it crunchier?? *lol*).

    Happy New Year, indeed. Wow, awesome. O.O I found Whitaker calling Jasper "treasure" really adorable. It just fit with how he and his personality changed. He's still Whitaker, but of course he's a bit different by now, and you made that just beautifully. :)

    "God isn’t here, but I’d be happy to substitute." *lol* The dirty talking came unexpected, but it was so perfect for that moment. ;)
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  • From KathrynH on September 22, 2009
    *Raises a hand while bouncing in the seat* Ooo, I know, pick me!! He'll show him by riding him like a cowboy at a rodeo! J/K.....kinda. Hehe =P
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  • From Songoftime on September 22, 2009
    And now we've come full circle. It's not so much that I didn't like him as a character. It's just I wouldn't get along with him as a person. I didn't mean anything against your writing, and it's good that some people don't like characters. If everyone likes them, he/she's probably a Mary Sue
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  • From elvinwitch on September 21, 2009
    It happened about the same way as I thought it would though. Bella is going to want to join them though i mean "if Whitaker can be a vampire why can't i?!" The next question would be if Jasper wants him to be a vampire.
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