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By : StargateFanatic
  • From TheBlindQueen on December 30, 2009
    What a perfectly lovely update! Your Jasper and Whitaker just shine, taking on a life of their own. Beautiful.
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  • From DBZchick on December 13, 2009
    Wow! What a powerful chapter! I must admit that I've been busy lately and took a break from this story for a while, but man - now I wonder how I managed to stay away! I can't wait to see how this story continues and don't want it to end. Keep it up PLEASE! I really love Whitaker and Jasper's relationship. I can't help, but wonder how far this is going to go with Mike and if Alice is going to show back up eventually? Can't wait to read more! :D
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  • From elvinwitch on December 12, 2009
    Yes that it will. my one concern is if mike it ready for that. He still has the memories of the rape in his mind. his body might be ready but is he? other than that i have to comments. oh and i know this is one chapter too late but thank god that bastard is going to jail!
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  • From VindictiveDiva on December 11, 2009
    Well! That was certainly unexpected. I stopped being lazy and signed into my author account. Can't wait to read more... You're tempting me to write Twilight fan fic, this is odd but strangely good. - Alecto.
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  • From ANON - Alecto on December 06, 2009
    Yeah, one day. What can I say I was bloody bored and couldn't go anywhere so for about 10 hours I read this. I think that Whitaker should have stuck around, though if it had been me I would have reminded Mr. Perkins he's a damned pedo and no one would miss him.
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  • From elvinwitch on December 06, 2009
    One a sick vindictive bastard (excuse my language) always a sick bastard. I can't see a pedophile changing his ways that quickly. I mean he did still try to get Whitaker so he obviously didn't change that much. I think that it is only a matter of time before he slips up again. I don't think he will do it when Whitaker is there to see but i can see it happening. If you do decide for him to slip up please don't write a rape scene or at least not one with detail. It was a good show to how Whitaker changed and how he is slowing getting over his fear and how much Jasper helps him. I think it was a good choice on how you went about that chapter. The baby boy from the beginning of the story is growing up into a man which is very interesting to watch. Although there is still a hint of that boy when he is with Jasper during a difficult time of his life. The need for 'mommy and daddy'. The bringing up the memory of his parents and grandfather could being up stronger 'nightmares' in some but not all. It would also be interesting to go more into what happened to his parents. These are just things that i thought of as i read it not suggestions.
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  • From lileeyore76 on December 03, 2009
    Hey wanted you to know that even though now is the first time I've had a chance to review I'm finding this story very much entertaining and interesting. I think Whitaker did make the right decision keep going I can't wait. Question ever thought about writing how Jasper feels about some of what's going on? Just a thought from a fellow writer.


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  • From SlaveGirl on November 24, 2009
    OMG! So I just finished reading the whole thing. I really love it those far. Whitaker is a great character and I like the way you have characterized Jasper in this piece. Also, I can't believe you went there!! I had a feeling that might happen but was hoping against it. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Alecto on November 22, 2009
    I actually read this story in one day (long ass day, lol!) and I must say I just love it! Jasper never gets enough lovin' fan fic wise. As for the latest chaper... Dear lord woman you're evil!
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  • From TheBlindQueen on November 17, 2009
    Such a lovely, tender scene between them. And then WHAM! You slam us in the face with that ending! But I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From elvinwitch on November 12, 2009
    Yes it was worth the wait. I don't know what it was about the other story but it held my attention better. Don't get me wrong i love You'll See and I find myself looking each time to see if you updated but there is something missing from this one. The mystery or something. I'll tell you more when i can figure it out myself. If you want me to that is, if not just tell me and I'll leave the more negative comments to myself.
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  • From KathrynH on November 12, 2009
    After reading the last few chapters this evening I'm going to guess that it's not so much a repeated phrase, as it is a repeated thought given vocalization. That thought being each of them saying "I'll protect you" in some form or another. Of course I realize that this is the wrong answer, but I'm apparently still too 'dazzled' from my 'house call' with the good doctor to be able to see any other recurring items. I'm also blaming said doctor for my most recent abscence...let your imaginations roam with that one! Hehe. Also I must thoroughly agree with GoM on your astounding descriptions of the emotions! The part about them being insanely wonderful, not the jealousy bit, since I'm more of an editor than an author. The shopping scene and the prom were absolutely adorable AKA Cute! Love the "Why do I have to be the girl?" parts, too funny! I'm going to have to look up the song, never heard it. Dang, that was way longer than expected, I'll shut up now.
    ~Zynda (Foamy the Squirrel Fan Club Member) =P
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  • From Songoftime on November 11, 2009
    The dj's reaction was funny! There was a M/M pair at my prom, and a lot of the more conservative ones had very funny looks on their faces when they walked out. The last bit was very romantic :)
    @ your response: not what I meant by preparations, and we called it cute cause that's what it was.
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  • From elvinwitch on November 10, 2009
    Aww I was looking forward to him learning to dance. This chapter seemed to lack your usual umph so to speak.
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  • From ANON - Antigone on November 09, 2009
    Yaaayy, prom time! Can't wait until after the prom, hehe. I thought of a great slow song if you're in need of one. It's Mazzy Star - Fade Into You. Such a sweet and beautiful song. Can't wait until the next chapter!
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