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Reviews for She Did Not Go.

By : dark1starr
  • From ANON - MarieMJS on January 04, 2006
    Wow this is a great fic so far, definitely far above what we usually read in the Narnia category here, very well written and very emotionnal... I like the developping stronger relationship between Lucy and Tumnus, even if it has IMO to stay in some kind of "decent" or rather spiritual way... Can't wait for next chapter :D
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  • From ANON - K-chan on January 04, 2006
    *applauds* Very nice. It has a decent plot, strong central characters, the minor characters have personality... I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Roisin on January 04, 2006
    Ah - If Aslan is there - I'm there. I'm loving this story so far. And as one of the other reviewers said above - you are writing an actual story with a real plot and dialogue, etc. I love these kinds of stories. They're more realistic as opposed to the ones where the characters meet, fall in love or hate each others guts, and then are fucking each other like rabbits by the third paragraph!
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  • From dark1starr on January 03, 2006
    Oh It counts. I am just a total Review whore. I love getting feed back and knowing that people like the work that I write. I loved getting your review. I was grinning wide and in fact, after I got the first two, it was almost immediat that I wrote chapter two. They inspire me. If I know I have people that really want to see what is coming next ? That is just..the greatest thing.

    I hope to see this story soaring with reviews. My one story, The blood of Three kings. It is a conyinuation of my first story Serenity..it has 74 reviews on it. I love seeing that number so high. It is an original/Fantasy fic though. All of my others are. This is my second attempt at writing a story within an already established fandom but I love Narnia and have my own ideas how I thought it should go.

    So here we are now. I hope you all are enjoying it. Chapter four should be coming soon. The beta is also working on the chapters as we speak. So they will get reposted with correction soon.

    Thank you all! Keep enjoying and reviewing.

    Starfyre
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  • From ANON - Earwen on January 03, 2006
    *sob* how cute! Oh they truly are such a cute couple! I really love your story and i hope my review counts as something and hopefully encourages you to continue. I read it and i love it. Please don't stop. I would be crushed if you did.

    All the best and fair writing,

    Your #1 Fic Reader,

    Earwen/Maeg
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  • From ANON - sumak on January 03, 2006
    wow this story is just getting better and better i honestly think this is alot better heartfelt wise then the movie what do you folks think?
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  • From gothdarkkedragon on January 03, 2006
    Plot! Characterization! Actual story development, and not just people randomly meeting and having sex.

    Love it, and definately keep it up.
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  • From ANON - -dragon- on January 03, 2006
    Ah, numminess. Have yet to see the movie, though I've read the series countless times.

    Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Keep up the writting.
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  • From dark1starr on January 03, 2006
    She waited the Ten Minutes at first before she started to call for them. As she said, something inside her said to avoid it. It is just something that I feel would have happened. It also reads that she didn't actually leave until about twenty minutes after the initial ten, when they had not answered or called to her from the trail. That would make a good half hour for her in her defense.

    It was just one of those gut instincts that said don't go. Sometimes even those are more powerful than your urge to follow after your family. I hope you can still enjoy the story, even though you may feel differently about some parts. As for Aslan, he is in my plot bunnies head to make his debute. It would not be Narnia without Aslan.

    Anyways thank you all for the reviews. I hope they keep coming as I add chapters to my ideas of what should have happened.


    Starfyre
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  • From ANON - Roisin on January 03, 2006
    This is a wonderful beginning. I read these books so much when I was little the covers fell off! Lucy has always been my favorite - along with Aslan of course. I'd love for him to put in an appearance. I can't see anyone smuttying him up! - but anything else - I can't wait to see what you do wtih this. You're off to a great start.
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  • From amazingenthusiasto on January 03, 2006
    This is a very sweet tale. I absolutely adore Mr. Tumnus, and am also very fond of his portrayal in the movie. In the film version, it did seem to me that, should Lucy grow up, they might fall in love.

    So now you've presented me with this! Oh answer to my prayers! It is certainly a good start, however you may want to consider a Beta reader to help with the little mistakes. Also, it isn't quite convincing that Lucy would not go looking for her brothers and sister, and would leave them there after only ten minutes. For now, though, I'm going to help you with this: "Pevensie" not "Prevensie" *grins*

    Looking forward to more!

    ~The Amazing Enthusiasto~
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  • From dark1starr on January 02, 2006
    With all my warnings, I always put just a few things up. I have always reserved the right to change them as the story goes. I am not exactly sure how to list what I have in mind so I am being ready for anything. I don't wish someone coming back and saying I did not warn them properly about the story.


    Thank you very much for the review.


    Starfyre
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  • From ANON - Earwen on January 02, 2006
    Wonderfully written! Well done! I have been looking for a Lucy/Tumnus fic forever and I have finally found one! Thank you and please update soon! Don't keep me waiting for more. I'm 19 and i'm only getting older lmao.

    Fair Writing!

    Eawen/Maegan
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  • From ANON - Cheryl on January 02, 2006
    You're a very good writer. I've read all the Narnia books and you haven't contradicted anything from the stories. Keep writing. I'm not into beastiality (I'm guessing that's what's coming) but I love your writing style. My heart aches in sympathy for Tumnus.
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