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Reviews for Jacqueline homes

By : Titan
  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2006
    You need disclaimers if you want the fic to stay up and your formatting is discouraging. Not many will want to read it.
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  • From ANON - mariteri on September 15, 2006
    You and this story are in need of three things. One, you need to learn how to spell. Two, this story needs a beta reader to correct all the errors in it. And three, you need a few basic English courses. Now for the somewhat nice part of the review--The story seems to be a okay one. BUT...it needs to be fixed. As a writter words are your tool. You are creating a world with them and if you cannot or are unable to express yourself correctly no one is going to know what you are trying to say or care for that matter. For your own sake at least use spell check. Good Luck.
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  • From ANON - shirley_holmes on February 01, 2006
    Nice story, although there are some grammatical errors. Please update toon =) I love M/F, HET stuff, but there's not much that kind of stories about Sherlock Holmes here. Yours is 3rd I believe..
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  • From ANON - Susana on January 28, 2006
    bravo, please update, I am fanatic of fics Sherlock/Watson/WOMEN.
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