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Reviews for Last Christmas

By : LittleWing
  • From lordoberon on January 31, 2011
    delicious sequel! I already left ar eview but my internet decided to be crap...

    the kiss was delicious. yum! I hope there is more! I almost wanted there to be more James/Edward, but I can see that James wanted Edward to want him. I hope there is smut in part 3...I like how you characterized Jasper. =D

    My only critical comment is that you should clarify more that the gun did not kill James. That confused me. I thought it had, so why did the gun shot go off and then James was only unconscious? And couldn't James just barrel through the locked door by force?

    I would've rather thought the boys would've tossed James into the pit ad buried him alive...but that would've been too harsh perhaps.
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  • From frapanappy on February 06, 2009
    i read this story and the other one, i liked both of them. you write well.
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