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Reviews for The Black Holiday

By : Renee1985
  • From ebonijade on May 28, 2009
    I cannot tell you how happy I am that you decided to continue the story. It is wonderful. I love the two points of views, please continue.
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  • From Stonekipsta on May 26, 2009
    I like the storyline, and the general outline of what's going to happen in the story, but you really need to double check your gramar and spelling. There were words missing, and misspelled, and run-on sentences ran amuck. All in all, though, it isn't that bad for your first fic. Well done.
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  • From Malu on May 26, 2009
    jaja its funny that they got married last! but like they say "safe the best for last" right??
    it was a cute chap! i like reading both sides!!
    Malu D.
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  • From AnastasiaBeaverhausen on May 02, 2009
    More, More, MORE please!!! This story has really gotten great and I hope all the stuff that's keeping you so busy will ease up soon so you can treat us with more of your writing. It's wonderful!
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  • From FlnFroggie on April 16, 2009
    I am sorry things are so tough for you right now I hope things get better. I will be waiting for that update when you feel better.
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  • From Kim620 on April 16, 2009
    No worries as long as you don't forget us loyal few :D
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  • From FlnFroggie on April 10, 2009
    I think that you should atleast do the wedding. That would be nice to be able to read.
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  • From Kim620 on April 04, 2009
    YAY!!!!!! It's nice to know that this story will continue. Makes me very happy.
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  • From FlnFroggie on April 04, 2009
    I love the story but I would like to see them get married and have a baby.
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  • From Malu on April 04, 2009
    yeah!! more chaps!! the "end" was nice, but i want to see the weeding and they living toguether, and to see how is Edward going to find a balance between his job and Bella....and i want to see the BABY!! =D
    continue PLEASE!
    Malu D.
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  • From Kim620 on April 04, 2009
    Oh No! I will be so sad if that was indeed the final chapter. It would have been so nice to see their engagement time and the wedding and the happily ever after.
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  • From Kim620 on April 04, 2009
    Phfew I am so glad it was a false alarm. Glad to see all is well in their world. I am glad they didn't confront Rosalie at the house since it was their night but I do hope they get a chance in the future.
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  • From on April 04, 2009
    I think doing the one more chapter set in the future is a better way to end this story. Anyway, great chapter, i'm glad everything worked out for them.
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  • From ebonijade on April 03, 2009
    Oh please, please do not stop the story there! I have been getting SO into this story that I have been checking this website EVERYDAY at least 2-3 times DAILY just to see if there has been anything posted. This story is too good to stop now. I love how you work with the characters and how you throw in lines from the book. I think I just love the entire idea of the story! Please, please keep writing...I will keep reading, no matter how long it takes you to post or how many chapters you write.
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  • From FlnFroggie on March 27, 2009
    I REALLY LOVE this story! I read the whole story before reviewing I love the references from twilight. Please update soon!!!
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