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Reviews for Destiny Awaits

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  • From Abaker9 on November 04, 2021

    Please update


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  • From JXBAddicted on March 30, 2019

    That was great!!!  I can't wait for more!!    TTFN!!  JXB   ðŸ˜Š


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  • From wickedrose on May 17, 2016
    love this story keep it up
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2014
    Awesome story so far, I loved it.

    Dani
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  • From ANON - Miranda37 on June 22, 2013
    Hi, my name is Miranda and I wanted to let you know how much I love your fanfiction, however... I feel that since this is on AFF (adultfanfiction) You should have more heat in your story. Other than that I can not wait to read more of your stuff and I hope you add on to Destiny Awaits soon. Also, where are you from? Your dialect and description are different and sometimes misunderstood, other than that I believe I could have my agency contact you in order to possibly create something with you, not Twilight related though. Toodles~
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  • From feelingcowgirlish on April 23, 2012
    Awesome story can't wait to read more!
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  • From Hateyouhatingme on July 26, 2010
    Absolutely wonderful! I think I am addicted.. seeing as I stayed up all night because I couldn't turn away. Please continue! I cannot wait for the next installment! Also, I am dutifully running at top speed towards fanfic now so I can read your other story as well.
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  • From kinrowan32 on July 26, 2010
    Wow completely and. Utterly grabbed and held my. Attention.
    I hope to read more of this story!!!! Absolutely loved your story
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  • From butabara on July 15, 2010
    I. Abso. Freaking. Lutely. Love. This. Story. I am DYING for more!! I love how you seem to have captured the characters damn near perfectly.

    VERY well done :)
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  • From AudyChelle on June 07, 2010
    I love your story please continue to write more. I can't wait to see more of your imagination. I can't stand any of the Bella/Edward. So Please write more.
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  • From terraequalslove on April 01, 2010
    Amazing seriously. Write more soon!
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  • From antisymmetry on March 03, 2010
    Seriously, I am completely in love with this story. I stumbled upon it 2 days ago & have spent every free second reading it. I even created an account on here & ff.net just so I could tell you how incredible this story is. Without a doubt the best fic I've read, probably ever. Your portrayal of the characters is incredible, and your writing has me so hooked that I wish the books had followed this plot instead. PLEASE don't let it end here...I'm dying to know what happens next. An update would be amazing... :D I think I may be going through withdrawals. lol. Thanks!
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  • From Safir84 on February 08, 2010
    Okay, so I did actually read this wonderful story over here, at least a little over six months ago, but I didn’t review because I figured I just leave one over at ff.net instead, which I have and a few more since then too! But seeing as you’ve not been updating in roughly that same amount of time, I thought that maybe I should leave one over here too! And Voila, hehe, but I must warn you it’s a rough copy of my first one over at ff.net, just so you know, sorry but I’m a little lazy, oops!

    Anyway, on with the review shall we; hehe! Wow, I'm almost speechless here, I swear to God, that this story of yours must be of one the absolutely best ones I've yet to read, I love it so much! Big Kudos to you! The plot is amazing, I think and quite original too (well, at least for me), the character portrayal's awesome as well, as the character interactions, of course, especially Bella/Jasper, but I totally love the way you described all of them, so...lol!

    And the whole story itself is very well written, which I very much appreciate, so thank you! The fic is also hilarious, Emmett is especially funny, I love him even more now, thanks to you. Jasper's of course, one of my favourites as well, as Bella; he's amazing and totally delicious and she's so adorable and cool in this fic, not at all like in the books, which is a major plus, hehe!

    Rosealie is awesome too and very sweet, I really liked how Bella and she slowly became friends, very nice. Esme and Carlisle are really sweet too and I also really liked their respective relationship with Bella, so sweet! Edward now, well; he's quite the arse in this one, let's just say that I'm not he's biggest fan right now, lol! And poor Alice, tsk tsk...at first I kind of resented her a little bit, but then I thought that maybe; what she did was best for everyone, even though she left Jasper in such a state and whatnot! I mean; because all of it would have happed anyway, right?! And remember; "What doesn't kill you, make you stronger", so...It all worked out pretty good in the end, well, kind of! Edward is still heartbroken though, but I'm sure he'll too see the light at the end of the tunnel, right?!

    Now to the review of this particular chapter; the character interaction was excellent as always, the first scene with Jasper and Rosalie was so sweet, I can't believe he'd never hugged her before, oh well, it was über-cute!

    And well, the funniest scene must have been the one with Bella and Emmett; he named all of his pets Bob, haha! More so, he actually went to a beauty school in the 80´s on a dare and there was the make-up, wow, that sure was pretty priceless! I kept thinking that Bella had to take a picture of him, all dolled up, that would be so much fun, hehe!

    The whole cabin scene with her and Jasper was wonderful, of course, another favourite of mine! Awe, he cooked for her, that's beyond sweet, man, I'm a little jealous here, lol! And then there was the small lemon scene towards the end, wow, that sure was pretty hot, but I want more and I bet they want more too, laughs! Cannot wait to read more, so please update soon...


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  • From LylliesPlasticTears on December 06, 2009
    You have inspired me!! I read this entire story and the one on fanfiction.net and I have to say that I had the most brilliant idea for a story. not a jasper and bella ff but still an amazing story. and I would love for you to give me so notes. I introduced a new character, and I have been writing all weekend. I wrote the outline in an hr and a 1/2 and it is now 13 pgs in word. I had my fiance read the first couple pages and he said it was good and he wanted to keep reading but I don't know if he's just being nice. help?

    - Lyllie
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  • From LylliesPlasticTears on November 29, 2009
    Omg. I am fervently in love with this ff. I want more!! I have spent nearly my entire thanksgiving weekend reading this. the way you write it's like I'm there and in the head of the character. I love it!! and I love your portrayal of the characters. although I was a little apprehensive since I love Edward but I have to say you made me a Jasper/Bella shipper. please write more soon. I shall be looking out for it!!

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