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Reviews for Jacob

By : EvaBrick
  • From lordoberon on January 31, 2011
    I love the way you describe Jacob's wild wolf eyes. And I love how instead of letting Bella rule him and step all over him like she does in he books, he finally has some backbone. good for him!

    oh hottie Jacob...:p

    since mud pies! xD cute!
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  • From lordoberon on January 31, 2011
    xDDD Bert who smells like cheese! LOL!

    Aww, Jake. he wants to go with Bells, he just won't admit it. cute!

    The pow wow sounds cool!
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  • From lordoberon on January 31, 2011
    poor Bella...and sweet Jacob. =D love Jake!
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  • From lordoberon on January 31, 2011
    xDD Jacob's joy over getting the burgers to himself cracks me up!
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  • From lordoberon on January 31, 2011
    =D I like this start! Jake's speech is so moving and sweet...and true, when you think about it.
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  • From snapelover2009 on December 26, 2010
    I LOVE IT!
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  • From ANON - Suzy on September 09, 2010
    I just found this site. I've been working on a story of my own because I've been online for days looking for "Jacob Black erotic fiction" and have been deeply disappointed in what I found. So, this is my first review, ever. Anyway, I loved it! It's exactly what I was looking for. I love how it ties in to the real Twilight books. You really found a way to make it realistic, like it could have happened in the books. I hope you write more. The only thing that didn't make sense to me was how easily Jacob took to Bella, sexually. I would have figured there would be some kind of hesitation. But then again, he's a wolf. :) Great story!!
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  • From ANON - Mila-Renae on September 07, 2010
    Fantastic chapter! It seems like it's been forever since an update. And Jake going all wolfie would be HOT! Yum! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From LadyExcalibur on December 30, 2009
    Gotta love a good Jake story! Loved it.
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  • From CeeCee on December 27, 2009
    I still haven't seen either movie or read the books, but this is a great fic. The movie previews have made me like Jake so far.

    I enjoyed the pace of this story, and Jake's logic about vampires and how associating with them was ruining Bella's life bits and pieces at a time. He did it without implying that he thought any less of her and without handing her a big pile of I told you so's. You've made him sensitive and insightful, good qualities to see in a male character. Is there more?
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  • From Kayrahbear on December 20, 2009
    I could hug you for writing this wonderful story. I'm no huge Twilight fan.
    But I love the way you've written this. Bella seems like she really has a brain. I'd love an update! I'll be checking back for more.

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  • From ANON - WitchingMoon on December 17, 2009
    AWWWWWWW!!!!! I love it! Please keep it going.
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  • From TwilightKey17 on December 15, 2009
    Don't ever do that to me again! Don't leave me so long without an update...especially in such a compromising position! I had to re-read the whole story to remember. PLEASE update this soon! I need to know what happens. XD
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  • From spooksies on December 14, 2009
    majorly drool worthy................

    uh...........gonna go and.......do somemthing.............

    keep up the good work!!!

    miko ~_^
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  • From ANON - Kimberly on December 14, 2009
    Please tell me there is more?? That was great!
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