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By : StargateFanatic
  • From VindictiveDiva on February 02, 2010
    Oh my GOD, you scared the daylights out of me! Sweet chapter though, really. Okay okay I am SO severely lacking in reviews but I've been busy too. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Songoftime on January 28, 2010
    Didn't really care for the whole Perkins affair, but that's just personal taste. The writing was good, as always. The Egyptian theme is interesting. I never really put Egyptian mythology and European mythology together. The new antagonist is a little cliche imo, but I'm liking the snarkiness (if that's a real word). Perhaps a deeper back story would help, but that's in your hands. I'm looking forward to seeing how this concludes. Peace
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  • From elvinwitch on January 27, 2010
    Yes and no. but now i very strongly dislike you!
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  • From DBZchick on January 26, 2010
    ACK! You're killing me! I'm hanging on the edge of my seat. Jasper can't be gone! That was probably my very favorite chapter so far! Beautifully written and so romantic, yet also dramatic! I can't wait for the next one!!!
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  • From DBZchick on January 21, 2010
    Interesting new twist. Alas, the ending begins... I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapters in both stories. :D I'm glad you're considering doing the whole story for I'll See. I still kinda wonder if Alice may make an appearance after all this. We'll just have to see what you've got scheming...
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  • From elvinwitch on January 19, 2010
    Yes it most definitely is. I like this amulet thing it kinda fascinates me. Who would know enough about them to kill them? They keep very quiet about them except for the werewolves the are still a secret. Unless rapist guy knows more about them then he lets on. The denoting of time was a bit choppy but yours was one of the better ones that i have read. I can't do much better. That is one skill that i think just comes with time. That's all for now.
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  • From DBZchick on January 09, 2010
    Great job as always! Loved it! I personally would really love to see "I'll See" continued thru EVERY chapter of their story from Jasper's point of view! But if I had to pick just one specific scene, it'd be when Jasper's attacked and inadvertently bites and transforms Whitaker. Keep up the great work and I'll anxiously be awaiting the next chapter of both!
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  • From elvinwitch on January 08, 2010
    First off Happy New Year! Now that that's over. WOW! I didn't think you had it in you I mean bound hands is one thing full out domination is another. That was most unexpected but interesting. Very intriguing I sort of like how you portrayed Mikes parents the homophobic aspect is what is usually visioned in the small town atmosphere. I liked it can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From TheBlindQueen on January 07, 2010
    Loved it! Poor Mike. I'm glad that Jasper and Whitaker are there for him.
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  • From ANON - Tatyana on January 06, 2010
    I love your story and your character, Whitaker. He is so real. I've read many of the slash fics for Twilight, I have to say, I wait on baited breath for your next chapter.
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  • From kirifox01 on January 04, 2010
    I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of Mike's abuse yet. And the threesome was hott!
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  • From DBZchick on January 03, 2010
    I just really love Jasper x Whitaker! (And I'm usually not so big a fan of other's OC). Believe it or not, even when I go to see New Moon, I always imagine Jasper with Whitaker. Alice and Jasper are wonderful, but you've created such a great protagonist and compliment to an existing distinguished character. It's almost like they're each other's Yin and Yang. Keep up your great work! Happy New Year!
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  • From DBZchick on January 03, 2010
    Yay for scary, protective Jasper! Nice chapter! You didn't take too long to get it out, but as always I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter! How sad to think that there are probably many, many teens/people, who are scared to come out to even his/her parents'. Keep up the great work!
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  • From elvinwitch on December 30, 2009
    i'm glag your back. that went rather well. It opened a new window to the story. how this will change the dinamics of the relationship between those three. It seems like Mike likes them but is it retured. Will it be a one time thing or not so many question so little answer (right now). WELCOME BACK I MISSED YOU!
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  • From DBZchick on December 30, 2009
    Wow! That was smokin' hot! I've been checking on here almost every day waiting for an update. There are few stories I've ever done that for. Great chapter! Keep up all your great work!
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