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Loved it until I read that Jasper is Edwards dom and that they are going to share mike. That just ruined it for me. I could see Edward being Mikes dom and all but not edward sharing his mate.

different but good, me like.

Ohmygosh! I know just about exactly how you feel! I keep all my slash word documents and work on a memory stick/flash drive, and maybe a week ago or so I magically managed to erase EVERYTHING. It freaking threw me through a loop and depressed me. It can be -so hard- to write when you realize; 'Oh I don't have that document anymore. . . .' I hope everything goes okay for you. I managed to pull through, mostly, and I know you can too!

Ohh, I’m only just into the first chapter and it’s good already. Hello hello, my fellow writer in the M/M section of Twilight Fiction! I was the only one here at first, which saddened me. (Though I know that there are more M/M stories, just not posted in this particular section) So today I was like; 'Maybe I'll see if it's still just me.' And when I did, I saw two other stories, and I was like, Yay! So of course, I just had to read!

I’ll admit, at first I was like; ‘Edward and. . . Mike?’ But, you make Mike so cute, when he blushes and stuff, that it makes it a better couple. And I like how he was already gay and had an ex-boyfriend and Edward steps in all hero-like. And I love how Bella knows about the Cullens and is cheering Edward on with Mike and such. Funny and adorable!

Aww poor Mike! Stupid jock ex-boyfriend, grr! But Edward and Mike in the hospital; so sweet! “No one is going to see my no no places unless I let them” that made me laugh! ‘No no places’? How cute is that. Like a little kid’s way of saying it. Ohmygosh! His parents are like, meanies! Yelling and being demanding and rude. Pfft, I don’t like them.

I’m a bit unsure about Edward being with both Edward and Mike. I’d like it to just be Mike, but that’s cause I think it’d be cute, and I’m into M/M not M/M/F or anything like that. But we shall see how it goes. It does move a little fast, but it’s still good. Holygoodness! I didn’t see that coming with Bella! Well, I was thinking that something might happen, since it says M/M and I was hoping she’d be out of the picture, but I was taken by surprise!

Them thinking of getting dogs is amusing and cute. It does complete the picture. I love how it’s just Mike and Edward now; adorable. Whoa, Jasper x Mike actually sounds hot. But I don’t know about the three of them. Plus I’ve never been into the Mast/Slave thing personally.

Anyways, lots of rambling, that’s what I do. I like your fic!! Just wanted to let you know. Keep up the slashy goodness! You’ve got a faithful reader right here! Your writing it good and I like your ideas. The plot is interesting and keeps you going, and I like all the interactions in the Cullen family. Plus I'm all curious about Bella and Victoria now!

I didn't see that coming...it works though. Can't wait for more!

You have a nice start on the tenth chapter. don't rush things too quickly, and remember to have fun with it! You're doing a great job.

This was interesting. I truly enjoyed it.

Strangely I think that was my favorite chapter so far! Please keep it up!

This story just keeps getting better! I can't wait to read more.

This story keeps getting better. I can't wait to find out what happens with the newborns coming. Please update soon!