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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't get to read as often as I'd like, but I am truly addicted to this story. It's so terribly sad, so well written. You have me aching and glued to the page.
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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Write Faster Please!! I love this story line, even though I'm team Edward all the way!
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I love this story. Its so sweet, and so what should have been! Keep going please!
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very good story. I like the way you're managing to blend the different story-lines from the books. The characters are kept real and I just love the happy-ending feel between Bella and Jake. And of course Edwards musings!!
Keep it up!
Keep it up!
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going. This is really good angle and can go places. Has me hooked
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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that's beautiful! Such a heartbreaking story. I'm Bella/Edward all the way personally, but love Bella/Jacob too, in your story they're such a sweet & natural pairing. Doubt there's any way she could end up with Edward in the end in this story, it's great though - write more! x
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have to keep going! This was heartbreaking (quite literally at the end), and I feel like you got Edward's voice perfect. This has the making for a great story.
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That very last line was stunning and brilliant. Really good beginning - can't wait to see more of it (and Edward's suffering)! ;)
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I must say... I don't know how to describe it! I love how you write from inside Edward's head. I like hearing, or rather reading, what's he's thinking. I hope you continue this! It seems like it would be a good read so far.