rate_review Reviews

So....I finally got off of my lazy butt to review this story. Twice, though apparently the first copy of this didn't decide to get posted.

Quite honestly, I love your story though I'll admit I wasn't all that fond of it initially. Quite honestly, Liam's two powers AND a telepathic communication with Carlisle turned me off enough that it took like two weeks for me to finish the chapter.

Now that I'm past that though, I love the plot and just about everything about it. It's structured well and I can't wait for the next update. Though I do kinda want to know if the wolves have a telepathic communication at all because it's obviously not the same as the books. Also, why are Liam's eyes green? I don't think you ever explained why...

great chapter.

this story is getting very interesting. update soon.

loved, even though bella is in it too much, eew!

Why is there more Liam/Bella moments then Liam/Jacob moments? And why is Jacob acting so dumb? I hope Liam and Jacob are the main characters because so far it's been more Bella then Liam and Jacob :/ other then that you're doing a great job.

So good. Hope jacob and liam get together soon.

Another good chapter. Hope there will be more.

Love it. Hope there be more soon.