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Reviews for She Did Not Go.

By : dark1starr
  • From ANON - Earwen on January 13, 2006
    NOOOOOO!!!!!!*sobs* you are so unbelievably evil*sob* don't let her kill Tumnus!! No oh oh *falls down to the ground and begs* Please!


    This chapter was very good and very sad, i hate you for that lol. Please update soon! ^__^


    Fair writing,

    Earwen


    P.s I am so excited for the end!!
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  • From ANON - Butterbear on January 13, 2006
    That was evil of you. You led us right off that cliff! Poor Tumnus! SOMEONE SAVE HIM! It is a really good story and I love your writing but these Cliffs are going to send me into a heart attack before I turn twenty-four in Febuary.



    Butterz!!!

    Hugz N Kisses!!
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  • From ANON - Vixey on January 12, 2006
    Yay more lucy/tumnus steamy goodness. keep it up. are you trying to make it look like lucy is gonna lose the baby? :( i hope not. please dont let anything happen to Aslan either.
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  • From ANON - Earwen on January 12, 2006
    That was very sweet. *sigh*

    i hope they get the there safely and kick Nalsa's bum! great chapter as usual. updat soon!


    Fair writing,

    Earwen
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  • From ANON - tilekitten on January 12, 2006
    this was a good chapter but i'am still wondering what will happen next so please hurry and write more chapters i can't wait to read the rest of this story
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  • From ANON - Christe on January 12, 2006
    >>> 'His groin brushed over her womanly virtue'

    I am sorry, but there has got to be a better way to say this! Good story though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2006
    LOL did that guy paul-something steal your story? Cause he seems to be freaking out about it.
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  • From ANON - Roisin on January 12, 2006
    Ahhhh. What are you doing to poor Aslan?! Let Lucy save him, let the shadow Lucy get a heart - something! But I do love your writing - all the kids arguments - incest breath! You do have a way with words! Now I want to beat that black lion's ass!
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  • From ANON - Junika K. Riely on January 11, 2006
    I turned eighteen four days ago and moved into my own apartment. Woohoo! My room mate showed me this site. She is twenty-one but loves fan fics. She said I might to. This is the first fic I read on this site. I love it! I am going to read the rest of yours too. If they are anything like this I know they will be awesome. Plus, I've never really been intimate and the way you described those acts. I am in awe. I guess it doesn't help that I chose to only like girls but still! If I knew I could find a man that would love me like that? I would be all over him.

    I can't wait for more. I also hope I am doing this review right. My friends said I was.


    Junika
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  • From ANON - Paulethier on January 11, 2006
    Great story Starfyre! Keep it up! I want to apologize for the other day, i didnt mean to be an sob. Keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - Keepnitreal on January 11, 2006
    I Told You I would be back. This is the next chapter. I really can't wait for the next chapter. This is amazingly great. You must update. Aslan in danger? He has to escape. He is Aslan. Update soon!


    Cameron
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  • From ANON - sumak on January 11, 2006
    ok now lets see how aslan gets out of this one or else someone is going to be in trouble and i bet evil lucy has to get touched by a faun lol
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  • From luna26 on January 11, 2006
    Hola!, been a bit since i reviewed and it looks like you're still going strong, great story, looking forward to more chapters to help distract me from working on my own story :)
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  • From ANON - Butterbear on January 11, 2006
    Oh no! No you can't do that! Bad author! Let Aslan escape! Bad, BAD, BAD girl! They need Aslan! Oh, yeah. That was mean cutting us off with that tease of a love scene. Okay. Rant is out of my system. Great chapter. Now you just need to update.



    Butterz!!

    Hugz N Kisses!!
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  • From ANON - Earwen on January 11, 2006
    Oooh poor Aslan *huggles the lion and sobs* evil Nalsa! grr*kicks Nalsa in the paw* i hope Aslan will be alright....


    Naughty Tumnus *snerk* lol

    Great chapter as usual! Update soon!

    Fair Writing!

    Earwen
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