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Reviews for She Did Not Go.

By : dark1starr
  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2006
    I love this story and I can't wait for the rest of it! It is very well written. My only criticism would be that you maybe use '...'s too much to trail off your sentences, especially in the later chapters.
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  • From ANON - K-chan on January 10, 2006
    *whimpers* Not fair! You're evil for leaving it there! I want more. Please? I love your writing style, and it has a really good storyline. More! More!
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  • From ANON - Serendipity on January 10, 2006
    That was great. I want to see more now. More, More and More. You're awesome.
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  • From gothdarkkedragon on January 10, 2006
    Sweet. Now you can list favorite stories though. **nods**

    And I still am very curious about the tower. **nods, ponders possibility and probability of getting one of the two crowns**
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  • From Rain2886 on January 10, 2006
    see im an author...to um no stories though lol
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  • From ANON - Serendipity on January 10, 2006
    I decided to go ahead and read this. I read Narnia once but that was a long time ago. I didn't think I could understand or remember the characters. I didn't have problems. You described them so well that I didn't need to remember much. I am just now on chapter seven but that is a good chapter. I think Iwill re read it. I'll review again when I finish it.




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  • From ANON - Butterbear on January 10, 2006
    Wow! I had A lot of reading to catch up on. You are amazingly fast. This is great. I just got back from watching the movie too so it is kind of like an instant sequel! You capture plot so well and sigh, I love how your mind works with the love scenes. To think, that something like sexual contact could be taken to something so deep. I'm in love with Tumnus all over again if that is even possible.



    Butterz!!

    Hugz and kisses!!!
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  • From ANON - Earwen on January 10, 2006
    *waves back to Donovan Stryfe and smiles*
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  • From ANON - Earwen on January 10, 2006
    *cries hysterically* So not fair! Poor Lucy and Tumnus *sob* I hope Aslan will be okay....:'( Update very soon!


    Fair writing,


    Earwen
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  • From ANON - Keepnitreal on January 10, 2006
    I have been a bad fan and have not reviewed. Allow me the chance to correct that hanus misdeed. I shall have to leave a few just to make up for the chapters I have read and did not pay to see. I really like this story and the plot you have happening in it. Ot has great foreshadowing. Deep plot that ties in with all the books and an even deeper relationship that is developing with the two main charracters. Then you turn around and add a developed enemy. You don't just throw in some random monster and have them attack. They are planned and the enemy is great by the way. That is a very good concept. Darker shadows of the real self. There is so much going on in your story that it isn't just straight forward Line A goes to point B and point B goes to Plot end C, Like some of the other fics on here. I won't mention them because that wouldn't be the right thing to do. Keep writing. I really do enjoy this. Expect another review with the next chapter from me.


    Cameron
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  • From dark1starr on January 10, 2006
    To all my readers.

    This isn't a writing contest and I am not in competition with the other lucy/Tumnus fic on here. liesel? If You're going to compare me to them like that..and possibly ruin other people away from reading mine by said comparison...PLEASE don't Post reviews stating your opinion! That was terribly rude and inconsiderate of you.

    Starfyre
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  • From ANON - Liesel on January 10, 2006
    Yay, a new chapter! (A WONDERFUL new chapter!) Update soon -- I have to know about this tower now!
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  • From ANON - Pip on January 10, 2006
    >Please start reviewing more. I'm begininng to think no one likes what they are reading here.

    Rubbish! Of course we like it! Keep going, it's great!
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  • From ANON - Lara on January 09, 2006
    This story is sweet and hot and amazing, and I must have more now!!! *fangirls you*
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  • From ANON - VIxey on January 09, 2006
    please, please continue this. i love it!!!. i always thought lucy and tumnus should be together. I wsh someone would write a aslan/original femal story.
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