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Reviews for She Did Not Go.

By : dark1starr
  • From gothdarkkedragon on January 09, 2006
    Beta here. Sorry I've been a bit behind, but work has been rather hectic lately, and using most of my time. I will have the rest of the chapters beta'd and sent back soon, I promise.

    And seeing as how someone seems to have stolen my title as number 1 fan and reviewer, I shall henceforth be known as #beta and... um... yeah.

    **smiles and waves to Earwen, poofies to do... beta type stuff and... stuff**
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  • From ANON - lizzytheimmortal on January 09, 2006
    PLEASE KEEP UPDATING! I am in love with this story and I absolutely hate Narnia fanfics. (however, Tumnus saying "wow" is very strange.) If you need a beta-reader, let me know and i can help.

    Liz (lizzytheimmortal@hotmail.com)
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  • From ANON - Roisin on January 09, 2006
    That was so sweet, romantic, but not cheesy! Don't stop writing - I'm already loving reading about these "shadow" Pevensies. And I want to know what happens with the little boy, the guy in the purple robes and I want to see Aslan kick his brother's ass!
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  • From ANON - Earwen on January 09, 2006
    :O oh my god! That is...Ah!! I am speechless woman! And don;t you dare quit on me because no one is reviewing. i am! lol update soon!


    Fair Writing,

    Earwen/Maeg
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  • From ANON - Earwen on January 08, 2006
    Oh dear, that was beautiful. It almost made me cry.That was definately not smut, that WAS love and it was beautifully written.

    I'm very curious as to who this little boy is though......hmmmm.... please update soon!

    Fair Writing,

    Earwen
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  • From dark1starr on January 08, 2006
    I had actually considered that when writing and at the time I didn't know how to explain it. He uses Okay because Lucy does. Just as she has picked up on some of his little habits. You know how old couples can be. To me it adds a sense of realism because that is a fault in everyone. We always pick up on each others little quirks and start using them our selves.

    I hope this explains it better. Thank you for the review though. I appreciate it very much.


    Starfyre
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  • From nixwilliams on January 08, 2006
    i've only read to chapter six (i wish i'd started when you began posting!), but great work with an actual story going on here! my only gripe (and a small, petty one it is, too) is that lucy and tumnus keep saying "okay." now i guess it is possible that i've completely forgotton this bit of slang from the books (don't have them on hand, unfortunately), but i really don't think tumnus would use the word. lucy -might-... but... i think 'alright' is a better choice... anyway, considering that's the only thing i can fault, EXCELLENT WORK!!!
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  • From ANON - Steve on January 08, 2006
    Oaky, everything seems to make sense and such, but then you come up with this guy in purple robes and a kid. Is that a mistake, as I couldn't see it fitting as a flashback? Though, if it's a foreshadowing of something to come, well, should be interesting to see where it goes.
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  • From ANON - Maxine on January 08, 2006
    This story just keeps getting better and better! The plot is progressiing nicely, I'm really looking forward to what's going to happen. The love scene was so sexy and sweet at the same time. This is still one of the best Lucy/Tumnus fics I've read. I'll be checking back frequently for more updates. Until then, I'm going to read the whole thing again. It's just that good.
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  • From ANON - sumak on January 08, 2006
    and hte plot thickens an intresting way for a first attack although i do wonder what cats aslan will be gatheringand of course tumnus got some more booty lol which is always good
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  • From ANON - Earwen*knightress* ^__^ on January 08, 2006
    WOOT! Lucy and Tumnus have become naughty lol. This chapter rocked with dear Lucy helping Kale (did i spell that right? im terrible with names) and then the whole spinning and realizing that everyone was there for her! Naughty Aslan's brother, i have a feeling i won;t much like him. lol OHHH this story always keeps me at wits end and it will be the death of me i swear!


    Update soon!

    Fair Writing,


    Earwen/Maeg

    ^___^
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  • From ANON - Roisin on January 08, 2006
    I love the direction your going in - it's new and it's different. And now I'm dying of curiosity just to know what the hell is going on with Peter or if it really is Peter. Does that help lift your funk?! :)
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  • From ANON - FOB Rocks! on January 07, 2006
    Sweet story! Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Valiant on January 07, 2006
    Great Chapter! Update soon.

    Yours,

    Valiant
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  • From ANON - TumnusIsLove on January 07, 2006
    This is a great story! I hope you update soon, i really like your writing.


    TumnusIsLove
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