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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - HotTimali on January 09, 2007
    Hullo there, just to say, i love ur story, uv captured peter exactly like i imagine him to be on the brink of sexual experiance! your writin is fab, love the description and the story. keep it up, will def look out for more of your work! x x x
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  • From ANON - lizzi on December 08, 2006
    this was a beautiful story, so very romantic, you captured the esscenct of innocence and love perfectly. ive never read a more wonderful fan fic before.
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on November 26, 2006
    Oh my, what a beautiful story! You're an amazing writer.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on October 22, 2006
    WOW. Awesome! I loved it from begining to end, I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews on this. I would truly LOVE it if you wrote a sequal. Or anything. Great work! Definately one of the best Peter Pan Fanfics ever. Thank you for continuing to write it even without all the encouragement of reviews, many stories are left unfinshed because of that.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on October 21, 2006
    Wow, All I can say it wow... Bravo! this was a fasanating story and kept me wanting more and more chatpers as I read, which I havent found a story like this in awhile that I have read!

    so I'm actully not even a fan of Wendy's and Peters... I mean they make a good couple :) but I wasnt big fan to actully read fanfics but I just stumbled on here found your story, thought hmmm this might be intresting... so I started reading it... not ONLY was your story very intresting, your whiting style I LOVE (thank you!!!) and I LOVE your decriptions like how it went down to how the kiss tasted like, very nice.... I've read stories (non smut too) where its like.... and they kissed, it was a hot kiss... then they wanted to do it... so they did it... uh uh uh he came.... she felt really stupid for not so uh uh uh... she faked came... the end.... so boring... and LAME? lol... but I love your story!!!! I think its going up in my top 10 list of favoirte stories... and all of them are Anime (Gundam Wing) but now theres a Peter and Wendy... Hmmmm who would have thunk that I would start to like Peter pan fanfics... lol... ANYWAYS....REALLY great story I had so much fun reading it, not every day I read fanfics that are a lot like yours and I have been reading fanfics for probaby 8 years now and it gets harder and harder to find good whiters today. but yes...

    have a great night!!!!!

    GREAT STORY ONCE AGAIN (even if you wrote it in 04 and now its 06 its always fun to get things from past work huh? :))

    take care!
    jenny
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  • From ANON - pixi on September 09, 2006
    lovely. So happy to find a Peter/Wendy fic. Always where my heart lay
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  • From ANON - Gia on August 27, 2006
    In a word, "Exquisite". A good adult fanfiction story is sexy, interesting to read even before the sex scene, and stays true to the characters personalities. A GREAT STORY... causes your heart to flutter in the night, your breath to catch in your throat, and for a brief moment, you actually have an idea of what it would feel like to trully feel desire, yearning , and fullfillment from another human being. Your body and mind are left haunted and aching for more.

    This is a GREAT STORY.
    THANK YOU.
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  • From ANON - OnlineGirl on August 22, 2006
    I loved it^^
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  • From ANON - Riven Liether on August 09, 2006
    This was incredibly good. It really was, and I don't often say that. It was rather lucky, then, that my search for Peter Pan fanfics resulted in the finding of yours. I was absolutely entranced by every chapter. Truly excellent writing.

    ...You might want to fix the various typos found throughout each chapter, though. lol ^_~
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  • From ANON - Adnexus Confatalis on August 06, 2006
    wow, that was realy good! there should be more wendy/peter fics! hehe, now u have over a hundred reviews, good motivation for a sequal! *wink*wink*
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  • From ANON - Twilight's Hammer on June 16, 2006
    I usually wait until I actually finish a story to review it, unless it's a WIP, in which case I review from where the riter stopped.

    I love this story. Not because of the smut, but because it shows the innocence and naivety of teenagers during puberty, and also in their search for "The one"
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  • From ANON - PMRGchik on February 07, 2006
    So good, I had to read it again
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  • From ANON - Chan on January 29, 2006
    This was a lovely story. You handled the sexual awakening of innocents with sensitivity and tact, but it was still, to quote the annoying hordes of teen fanfic writers, hawt!

    I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
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  • From ANON - pan on January 25, 2006
    nice
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  • From ANON - Amanda on January 16, 2006
    oh my god this story is so good you have tp make a sequel. i mean it i was like all hot and botherd just reading it.
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