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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - Wren on September 26, 2005
    This was a story that I enjoyed immensly. I found that the characters were extremely well writen and the descriptions of the places were beautiful. I have not read that many peter pan stories but this one definately stands out amoung the story's that I have read. I really liked how you described Peter having youth in the turn of his ankle, and the something to do with his hair. I dont remember it exactly but I thought that it was really lovely. I also liked when he called her a dummy. It showed that even though his body had matured, he will always be who he really is. Great job! I will try to read more of your work because I enjoyed this one so much! *hands over a chocolate chip cookie*
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  • From Josephine1881 on August 24, 2005
    *sighs* What a wonderful story! It has the most beautiful atmosphere I´ve ever encountered in any story. It nearly made me cry. I wish I could express how it made me feel better, but I can´t. So I just give you standing ovations. Thank you so much for writing this!
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  • From ANON - Erfaciel on August 18, 2005
    That is possibly the best romantic/first-time fic I have ever read. You captured the innocence and ignorance of them both, especially Peter, in an endearingly brilliant way. This piece is just stunning, and I loved it. Thank you for a great read. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Arwen on August 16, 2005
    Wow...just...wow. Superb writing, perfect characterization, excellent story structure, wonderful sense of timing--I don't think I've ever read an adult story as good as this, and I'm quite certain many of the general audience stories I've read aren't as good as this either. I love stories that don't rush to conclusions ^_~ and that give really good characterization, as well as more realistic expectations. In short, I enjoy reading stories that are romance first, then sex. You accomplished this perfectly--few authors even try, even fewer succeed as you have. Please write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2005
    yay i loved your fic.....yay to all the fluff....it was so sweet.....good job on your writing ability. yay!
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  • From ANON - Joi on July 28, 2005
    that was really sweet. It had both a sweet, interesting plot and sex. Something that is hard to find. I enjoyed it very much.
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  • From ANON - Emi on July 19, 2005
    I just read the whole story- and let me tell u... IT'S AESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Artemis on July 19, 2005
    I truly enjoyed this story. You kept all of the characters so in-character, and captured their innocence quite well. This story was, in a word, beautiful. I enjoyed it far beyond any other PP fic I have ever read. Keep up the good work, and I shall watch for more from you. :)
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  • From ANON - jeannie on June 24, 2005
    I loved this story. Very well written.
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  • From ANON - sesshy_lover on June 01, 2005
    OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... ITS MY FAVORTIE... YOU ARE SOOOOOO CLEVER... HOW DID YOU PLAN THIS OUT!!!!?????????... WRITE AWAKENINGS 2 THE CONTINUATION... OR ELSE I WILL PLUNGE MY HOOK INTO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! * COUGH COUGH!!!* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... HAHA...HA... ~SILENCE~ *GRUNT...* NO, SERIOUSLY... FINISH IT...FIRST OF ALL... THE CONTINUATION COULD BE LIKE WENDY AND PETER HAVE FIGHT AND SHE RUNS AWAY INTO THE NIGHT... PETER REALIZES WHAT HE DID AND CHASES AFTER HER... WENDY MEETS AN INDIAN BOY AND FINDS SOLACE IN HIS ARMS (DONT TAKE IT THE WRONG WAY, I DONT MEAN SEX...) PETER SPOTS THEM AND THROWS A FIT... NEARLY KILLING THE INDIAN BOY AND THEN GIVES WENDY THE BEST "NIGHT" THEY EVER HAD JUST TO REMIND HER WHO SHE REALLY BELONG TO!!!!!!... AHHHHH HOW ROMANTIC!!!!!!!... * SWEAT DROP* I HAVE THIS ALL PLANNED OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... THANKS AND YOU BETTER WRITE A SEQUEL OR ELSE!!!!!!... ^-^
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  • From ANON - Aliesha on May 31, 2005
    Wow. This story, even if the subject matter was somewhat racy, was absolutely beautiful. I especially loved the ending, with Peter and Wendy being adults and children at the same time. Thank you for their happy ending.
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  • From evilbunnies on May 09, 2005
    You've written a fan-fic that is both sweet and sexy. Excellent job. :-)
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  • From ANON - Nako on May 03, 2005
    *applauds enthusiastically* =D Oh, it's almost frustrating, because I can't convey the excitement and overall wow-ness that I feel over this story without bursting into full caps and many many exclamation marks. *explodes.. in so many ways* This has to be one of the best stories I've ever read, and I LOVE the fact that you based it a bit on the movie. I loved that movie.. so very much *giggle-squeal* This story.. it's so.. tangible. I can almost smell the sea air, touch the leaves, walk upon the sturdy floor of their quaint marital home.. And the roses... *sighs all girly like*

    I love it. Absolutely love it. Their little bout in the grass gave me a blast in the past back to my first experiences of passion, fear and insecurity. Wow. Ohmygoodness wow. The naive love, the contrast of fact and feeling... wow. This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. Wow, and wow some more. Ohmygoodness, I think I love you. o_o WEEEEEEOMYGOSHYAY! ... I had to get that out. :) Okay, I'll stop rambling now...

    Conclusion: Wonderful. Beautiful. I love you. :)
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  • From ANON - Loren on April 02, 2005
    Absolutely enthralling! Excellent story! Really makes the transition from childhood to adulthood seem graceful and exciting! A++
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  • From ANON - Kara on March 15, 2005
    Excellent!
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