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Reviews for Awakenings

By : KimberlyA
  • From ANON - Grizz on January 15, 2006
    Dear Kimberly-A,
    I enjoyed your story more than most any other I have read of a similar nature. Your writing style is seemlessly in tune with that of Barrie himself, and I look forward to reading any other stories you have written or plan to write. I also feel you criticize yourself far too much so far as concerning romantic scenes within your story, for a story such as this would not function so pleasingly were it not for the romance. You have managed to make a story based upon the fictional lives of two children, and involve me within it so tightly that I feel nothing inappropriate ensued whatsoever. I am avidly against pedophelia and underage sexual activity you see, and yet this story feels as if it did not enter within those bounds.

    So to you, Kimberly, I give you my eternal kudos on a story well written and a job well done.

    Sincerely - Austin "Grizz" V.
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  • From ANON - Cyn on January 02, 2006
    Great story! I haven't read a story written this well in a while. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more stories from you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2006
    ummm, can I say friggin AWESOME!!!! thanks for writing a sweet/smutty fic for peter pan!
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  • From ANON - Memme on December 30, 2005
    Well, stumbled across this, but I must say, it's one of the most endearing "awakening" stories I've ever read. Very sweet, very cute... that two young people at their ages could remain so innocent still is just marvelous.

    Truly a joy to read. :)
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  • From ANON - Lena on December 26, 2005
    Great Story!
    You write wonderful and I loved the way you tried to make the concept of sex and the lovemaking between two unexperienced teenagers realistic, you hardly find that in Fanfiction nowadays. Though I usually stick with reading Harry Potter Fanfiction, this story really caught my attention, and I am glad that I did give it a chance. I hope to read more of your stories in the future!
    PS: I hope you write a Harry Potter Fanfic! :)
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  • From ANON - becca on December 23, 2005
    I love it! You are amazing, and wrote this to the letter the way peter would act. Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - fan on December 21, 2005
    this has got to be one of the most well written and erotic stories i have ever seen on this site. i stand in awe of your prowess. ;)
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  • From ANON - Nicole A Grissom on December 20, 2005
    All I can think is....Wow. I truly loved your story. It felt so natural that I had to laugh. I remember how confusing it was, too. It was great to read a work that brought out all the feelings and insecurities of that age without overdoing it. I felt like it kept the spirit of the movie while building it up into more, if that makes any sense. Anyway, I just wanted to review it and extend my congratulations on a job well done. It was a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - kimper on December 20, 2005
    good job! i had read this once before and came back to reread it and review! would love to see more of this sort of fic. thanks for the great read and keep up the wonderful work!

    kimper :)
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  • From darksecret911 on December 19, 2005
    nice one!!!!!!!!!!!!! really nice and hot but still little fluffy! great job!! if you ever think of deleting it email it to me i really like it! ^_^ thank you!
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  • From ANON - Brittni on December 18, 2005
    heyy,
    I am not sure how long ago this was written, for sheer lack of willingness to click back to find out when it was last updated, but this is one of the best stories I have read on AFF in a long time. I really like the way you molded ignorance and bliss, I have read several stories that have attempted it and they always turn out cheesy. One problem with the story, and I believe that this may be an error from the website but there are several instances where words are cut in half or jumbled in a way that they are hardly readible. I find that the jumbled words are easily deciphered, but they may be something you could fix if you felt they were a problem. Anyway, excellent work.

    Brit

    PS: Have you ever considered publishing an original work? Several authors posted on AFF, as of late, have attempted to. I think you have a good chance if not better than most at getting some of yours published. :p
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  • From ANON - twilight on November 16, 2005
    I adored this story. A friend of mine introduced me to it and I had such fun reading it. I think you did a wonderful job keeping Peter Pan innocent and yet...curious. It was like reading a fairy tale--revisiting a childhood story through grown up eyes. Wow... I am very impressed. There were a few typos, but they looked like download glitches. I truly enjoyed the story and I can't wait to tell my own circle of friends about it! Bravo...

    Twilight
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  • From ANON - Megan on November 14, 2005
    Very Well Written! IT was a Pleasure to Read! Keep up the good work :D
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  • From ANON - Ronald on October 13, 2005
    This was perfect. There are no other words.
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  • From ANON - dolphingirl0113 on October 11, 2005
    This is a beautiful story. Absolutely beautiful. You managed to balance innocence with passion, while keeping this continuation of the Peter Pan legend believable. So many people just have Peter instantly grow up and have the desires of a man (along with the knowledge of a man) and that simply makes no sense. You have portrayed it realistically and beautifully. Well done. Well done.
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